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Shylar
Things to do
- The date referencing in this article is a mess.
- Firstly, there's little reason why the death date needs three ref notes in the infobox. All of that can and should be combined into a single explanatory ref note.
- NEC in ref 3 can't really be used like that since that source does not make mention of Shylar's involvement in these events. There's a better and more relevant way to source this information using the sources that Shylar appears in.
- The intro claims that Shylar's actions take place in 22 BBY (as does the infobox), but the Bio really doesn't cover this. It just introduces her events as taking placing six months after the start of the war in 22 BBY; the article needs to establish how/why this is in 22 BBY as opposed to 21 BBY.
- I'm sure this could support an Equipment section.
- BTS is unsourced and should mention publisher. The last sentence is also filler and should just be removed. Tommy-Macaroni 21:05, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
Removal of GA status
- Placed on probation at Meeting 129. Tommy-Macaroni 21:05, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 130. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:15, July 19, 2020 (UTC)