Jor Drakas

Things to do

  • Since Jor Drakas is not mentioned in NEC, just double-referencing his death date doesn't work.
    • Since you're already writing a manual reference note, you should eliminate the double referencing. And the note needs to connect the Hunt for the Decimator with Jor Drakas. And it should be properly punctuated. Imperators II(Talk) 14:18, July 5, 2018 (UTC)
  • The Bio should be split into two subsection of four paragraphs with two images.
  • An image of him dueling Tann should be added and another image of him should be added.
  • "Jor Drakas' only appearance in Star Wars canon" should be reworded to reflect the Canon/Legends switch.
  • More quotes should be added from the game.
  • If "one month after the Battle of Geonosis" is only supported by NEC, that should also be mentioned in the date ref. Imperators II(Talk) 23:05, August 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • You're alternating between using and not using the definite article with Kaer Orbital Platform in intro and body. Imperators II(Talk) 23:05, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

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