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Jayfon
Things to do
- Needs an update from its non-canon LEGO appearance.
- Updated with all info what is about him in the game. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, April 26, 2011 (UTC)
- That addition needs heavy proofreading and de-ESL, please. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:10, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Proofread done. de-ESL????? Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:20, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- It still has some basic language and grammar errors, not to mention it's just kind of overly repetitive in some places. ESL = English as a Second Language. In other words, it might need a native speaker's touch. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:39, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. Should be done till the weekend. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:13, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- I've cleaned up the rest of the grammatical and language bits you still missed. This is the last part that has me wondering. What does this even mean? "...and is available to purchase for Free Game" I'm not sure that's even proper English. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:05, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Should be good now. Thank you for your work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:17, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- I'm afraid that doesn't resolve it at all. The issue revolves around the "purchase for Free Game" wording. Again, I have no idea or comprehension what this means, and I question whether it's even properly grammatical English. Like I said, it probably needs a native speaker familiar with the concept to look at it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:01, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks to MJ, this issue should be resolved. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:25, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
- I'm afraid that doesn't resolve it at all. The issue revolves around the "purchase for Free Game" wording. Again, I have no idea or comprehension what this means, and I question whether it's even properly grammatical English. Like I said, it probably needs a native speaker familiar with the concept to look at it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:01, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Should be good now. Thank you for your work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:17, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- I've cleaned up the rest of the grammatical and language bits you still missed. This is the last part that has me wondering. What does this even mean? "...and is available to purchase for Free Game" I'm not sure that's even proper English. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:05, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks. Should be done till the weekend. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:13, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
- It still has some basic language and grammar errors, not to mention it's just kind of overly repetitive in some places. ESL = English as a Second Language. In other words, it might need a native speaker's touch. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:39, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Proofread done. de-ESL????? Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:20, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- That addition needs heavy proofreading and de-ESL, please. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:10, April 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Updated with all info what is about him in the game. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, April 26, 2011 (UTC)
Removal of GA status
- Placed on probation during Meeting 34.—Tommy 9281 Sunday, April 24, 2011, 00:44 UTC
- Status retained at AC meeting 35. - Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 14:11, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
