Jarvashqiine

Things to do

  • Jarvashqiine
    • Underlinking
    • I would say the italicized portion of this sentence is just unnecessary and can be removed. The dates for his life can be gleaned from his article if necessary. Alternatively, present the dates in a ref note without the need to state this in the article body itself: "...and it was as a Sith Lord that he visited the Jarvashqiine at some point in his life, sometime between 82 BBY and 4 ABY."
      • Depending on what is done with this issue, the date referencing isn't accurate or ideal anyways.
    • I don't really see the need for this sentence, which seems extraneous and superfluous to the focus of this article subject: "The Jarvashqiine was not the only shamanistic order in the galaxy—many species, such as the Ewoks, Jawas, Duloks, and Nelvaanians practiced such beliefs, often on primitive, nonindustrial worlds."
    • BTS is unsourced. I would say the last two sentences are unnecessary.

Removal of GA status

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