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Gizor Dellso

Things to do

  • Infobox image needs to be reuploaded to be a minimum of 400px wide.
    • Done
  • Battlefront game cannot be used to source BBY dates throughout article.
    • Corrected
  • Article body is perfect size to subdivide into two smaller subsections of two paragraphs each, preferably with additional quotes and images if available.
    • Done.
  • BTS unsourced.
  • SW.com Databank entries are formatted Last name, First name.
    • I think I fixed it.Fan26 (Talk) 05:01, November 11, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

Redux review

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a reduxed good article. The result of the discussion was Good article status kept. Please do not modify the page.

Gizor Dellso

  • Redux comments: Reduxed per meeting 110.
  • Date added: November 21, 2018

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Support

  1. ACvote This was quite possibly the worst article I've ever worked on. Almost every detail was either incorrect, incomplete, or extrapolated with no basis in any of the sources. Anil and I worked our butts off to rebuild this one practically from the ground up, and he should be proud of his work here. Trust us, there's nothing left to object to. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:37, January 22, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Ah, good old Geyser Dell's. Imperators II(Talk) 23:40, January 24, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Very nice work, guys. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 06:47, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

Object

From the meeting log

  • The image is still cropped poorly. It's 450px wide, which is why it looks like the character is so small. There's no need for it to be wider than the minimum, 400px.
  • Audio files for the quotes should be looked into.
    • Added for the first three. The last one is from the old StarWars.com Databank, and I couldn't find a trooper saying that line in the game. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:12, November 28, 2018 (UTC)

Toprawa

  • Infobox issues:
    • We can see his skin color and at least that his eyes are "dark" from the main image. This should be reflected in the infobox and worked into the P/T.
    • It looks like there's some extrapolation going on with his Affiliations. He's listed with Geonosian Industries, which doesn't appear to be included in Battlefront II, to which that information is sourced. If there's nothing explicit connecting to him to that organization, I would suggest just removing it from the infobox and article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:09, January 15, 2019 (UTC)
      • I've looked at all the sources listed in the article, but none of them has any mention of Geonosian Industries. Removed it accordingly. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 06:06, January 15, 2019 (UTC)
  • Please check the game's subtitles for accuracy in these quotes. I'm guessing the game doesn't spell "realised" using the British spelling, for example. Pay attention to whether there are serial commas or not too. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:02, January 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Does Battlefront II actually support this claim about "all" Geonosians doing this? "Like all of his people, Dellso joined the Confederacy of Independent Systems and participated in the Clone Wars against the Galactic Republic."
    • Saying "all" Geonosians seems a little speculative to me, but since the game begins with the First Battle of Geonosis, it can be sourced to state that the Geonosian people were sided with the Separatists. I've made a slight rewording. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:26, January 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • As I began reviewing the article, I noticed there is quite a bit of detail regarding Dellso's Mustafar doings in the Klegger Corp Mining Facility article that is not present in this article. Things like traveling to Mustafar to meet with the Separatist leaders, working with other Geonosis to design the prototype battle droid, and being present for the discovery of Poggle's corpse. If any of this is accurate, this should be worked into this article body as well. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:21, January 16, 2019 (UTC)
    • I've rewatched the entire Battlefront II campaign, and those details seems like pure speculation. As I've already looked at the Sources for a previous objection, I am confident that is the case. Also, while rewatching the campaign, I noticed that the article lacked the mention of his Geonosian sonic blaster, which is also visible in the infobox image. Added a small Equipment section. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:26, January 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • I'd like to request a source check on this as well. Does the game actually state there were other holdouts besides and after him? "n creating a new droid army, Dellso became the leader of one of the last Separatist holdouts."
  • If the game actually refers to Dellso's Providence-class vessel as his flagship, I'm thinking an article for that individual ship would be appropriate.
  • Source check again. Does the game actually support this/mention these events? "...and refused to surrender after the Separatist Council's execution on Mustafar."
  • Source check. Does the game actually call him "skilled"? "Gizor Dellso was a skilled engineer..." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:54, January 17, 2019 (UTC)
  • We should see if we can get a higher quality version of that orbital bombardment image. I notice someone even tagged it with the image-quality template. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:55, January 17, 2019 (UTC)

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