Christya

Things to do

  • To whom is the lead quote being addressed? Revan? This should be specified.
  • Grammatically, there should be a comma after "play your cards right" in the Bio quote. Do the game's captions omit this punctuation?
  • Again, the Bio quote should indicate the recipient. Presumably Revan?
  • Since the KOTORCG reference note is being used to cite a specific event and not just a single date, I feel like that ref note needs a little bit more to explain how/why it's being tied into the events of the game, and more specifically Christya's appearance.
  • Christya's Bio quote makes a pretty clear indication that she's inviting Revan into a romantic encounter. This should be detailed in the article somehow, especially since she then leaves with someone else for what be interpreted to be for the same reasons.
  • The article says, "Revan handed her the money eagerly, and Christya began to move to the bar, telling him not to take too long." Which I find kind of unclear. Take long doing what? What is Revan doing instead of following her to the bar?
  • BTS should detail video game's release date and developer. Tommy-Macaroni 20:56, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

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