Charpp

Things to do

  • The intro needs some trimming, it's almost as long as the Biography.
  • Body can use an image.
    • No good images are available. Closest would be Maks Leem and it's small. Should I add it? ToRsO bOy (talk) 02:22, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Date is not sourced properly.
    • Changed date and sourced it to TNEC. ToRsO bOy (talk) 06:54, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Last sentence of BTS is completely unnecessary.
  • Check abridged audiobook for a mention.
  • Instead of repeating the same information about Charpp's appearance between the Biography and P&T, all the info should be in one place, i.e. the P&T section OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 09:15, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Removed the description from the body. ToRsO bOy (talk) 09:38, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
      • You've also removed some links which should be added back to the article OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 09:42, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Also, much of the first paragraph in the Biography has to do with P&T. Please reorganise the information. OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 10:43, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Reworded, and moved to P&T. ToRsO bOy (talk) 12:05, 27 July 2021 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

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