Althiri

Things to do

  • Needs a subsection header at the start of History.
  • Redlinks.
    • Took a look at Warfare and there's nothing to suggest these are specific models of ship that require an article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Eliminate page numbers from referencing.
    • Seems like this was already done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Needs a paragraph break.
  • BTS is unsourced and has redundant information.
  • Is the double ref for the homeworld the infobox necessary? The body already uses only one source for the same thing.
    • The EGTW is enough to reference this. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 13:54, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
  • The first instance of 3976 BBY doesn't appear to be sourced properly.
  • I'm personally not a fan of the way the subsections are currently handled, which is a one-paragraph section, follow by two paragraphs, and then one again. The least that could be done is remove the last subsection. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:08, 2 October 2021 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

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