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Duel on Mustafar
Please avoid adding in unnecessary detail and play-by-play information in any article, including the Duel on Mustafar. Do not attempt to create such flowery prose, since it is frowned upon. Thanks, JangFett (Talk) 15:17, June 18, 2013 (UTC)
- There is no need to say "his eyes turned yellow," since that has no relevance to the actual duel. Keep the information strictly on the duel and its aftermath. As for the lava, you can say since he was close to the edge, but do not add in "flowery prose," meaning "However by this point the Sith Lord's proximity to the of glowing, molten rock caused his clothing to ignite." Just say "However, by this point the Sith Lord's proximity to the river caused his clothing to ignite." JangFett (Talk) 15:24, June 18, 2013 (UTC)