Talk: Darthsci

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I don't want to be a kill joy but if everbody could be on their best behaviour. That means, no angry discussion, no cussing, nothing that could possibly upset anyone. Other than that, my talk page is open.--Darthsci^(Comlink) 15:18, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Daala

Welcome to Wookieepedia! Anyway, if you could help me with these objections, I (and Project Ambition) would appreciate it. Before you work on them I would recommend you edit some other articles, to get experience. Here are the objections that need to be addressed:

More background on Daala's decision to attack Mon Calamari desired. Expand and clean up the Battle of Mon Calamari paragraph. It doesn't read well and it's lacking in detail. More detail on the conference needed (with warlords). More detail on the sizable strike she ordered and on the buildup that preceded it. Her willingness to flaunt regulations should be listed in P&T. She could use a relationships section, as there is no equivalent mention in P&T. How that infobox picture was chosen is beyond me, but there's no way that is the highest quality image of Daala available. I would personally combine Return to Maw and Private war. 2GCW section needs fleshed out, with some longer sentences. More detail needed from Planet of Twilight. One paragraph is far too little. More details on Solo's interrogation. Detail what was worked on at the Maw, along with maybe some of its key personnel. More motivation on the decision to attack Mon Calamari.

If you have the Jedi Academy Trilogy, you'd be able to get some of these. If not, that's fine. However, I ask that you leave the major ones to me. If you have further questions, please feel free to ask me. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 19:37, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

• I've addressed some objections; the ones that still need to be resolved are there (I just didn't get to them). Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 11:44, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the help! Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:13, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
    • The new context is good. Is it possible to expand that paragraph anymore, and split it into two then? Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:24, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Project Ambition

A message from the Grand Moff. The latest from Project Ambition. Hello. I am Grand Moff Tranner, the new director of WookieeProject:Ambition, having taken over for former Director Thrawn. I've contacted you to ask if you still intend to participate in Project Ambition. I plan to reorganize the project, and I have some plans for it. As a member, I could use your help. Please contact me on my talk page to let me know if you still intend to contribute. Thank you. Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 22:18, 21 November 2008 (UTC) Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink)

Project Ambition's new main focus

A message from the Grand Moff. The latest from Project Ambition. Project Ambition now has a new main focus: Conan Antonio Motti. Please see the discussion forum for more information. If you are able to contribute, please let us know there. We appreciate any help you can give. Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 22:18, 21 November 2008 (UTC) Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink)