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Rewrite and move
I suggest rewriting and moving this article to avoid definitively claiming a location for this duel, as it's a legitimate event which could have happened on Manaan, Tatooine, Kashyyyk, or Korriban. —Silly Dan (talk) 15:30, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- A significant rewrite would do, agreed. But for now the templates must stay. MauserComlink 15:41, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- I wouldn't say that, there must be somekind of specific, "This is what must be done" kind of template somewhere to replace the CSD one. The page shouldn't be completely deleted just because of the locational issues. NaruHina Talk 14px 22:22, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- I've removed all inappropriate mentions of Manaan and have given the article a tentative new name. It can always be changed later. NaruHina Talk 14px 22:34, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- I don't know about saying an "unidentified planet". I'm no KOTOR expert, but from what I know, the planet where Bandon was killed has a name, we just don't know what it is. If I'm "misinterpreting" the meaning of unidentified, please tell me. I realize how it could be taken, but, IMO, it reads as though the planet is unnamed. Thoughts from others? Chack Jadson (Talk) 23:27, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- I've removed all inappropriate mentions of Manaan and have given the article a tentative new name. It can always be changed later. NaruHina Talk 14px 22:34, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- I wouldn't say that, there must be somekind of specific, "This is what must be done" kind of template somewhere to replace the CSD one. The page shouldn't be completely deleted just because of the locational issues. NaruHina Talk 14px 22:22, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
- The word "unidentified" is OOU and has been removed. I've also removed the deletion templates since the reason for it's deletion has been addressed. Grunny (Talk) 09:08, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
Wording
Can people please stop using terms like "minions" and "cronies" to describe the "bad guys"? It's so biased it beggars belief and this article is yet another culprit. -- —Harrar (Cut the comm chatter) 15:09, 24 August 2009 (UTC)