Featured article
could anyone help me make this a featured article? Ragnos deserves more than how it was before Ediskrad327 00:40, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
Tone
Examples of non-formal wording can be seen throughout the article, for example:
"Ragnos has a leading role, as the game pretty much is about the New Jedi Order efforts to stop the Disciples of Ragnos from resurrecting Marka Ragnos."
"He mostly wielded a Sith sword, consisting of a metal blade enhanced by Sith sorcery, a weapon of the primitive Sith race, which he could hide inside his scepter. It is possible only he knew of the sword's hiding [...]"
Once these and other examples have been changed the tag should be removed. Also, the last sentence of the second sentence is speculation ('possibly'). Holocron 
(Complain) 12:19, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
Vitiate
Same as on the Vitiate´s page, I remove Vitiate as the Apprentice of Marka. In the book itself, there is nothing that point out, that Vitiate was his Apprentice.--ScorpiO 19:22, November 21, 2011 (UTC)
While it is never indicated that he was his direct apprentice, it is obvious that Vitiate learned to control the dark side of the force thanks to some lessons he had under Marka Ragnos, making him an "indirect apprentice" I've also added The Book of Sith as part of Ragnos' sources, as seen here, in IGN's post of the book of sith in minute 1:04
I just watched the trailer and there is again nothing. In 1:04 there is nice pcture of Ragnos but that's it. In the book of Revan, there is said, that Ragnos summoed Tenebre in his 13 after his deeds were "impressive". It is Also said there that Ragnos was Impressed with the boy and his skills and he granted the boy the title of Lord Vitiate, ruler of Medriaas. After that, Vitiate returned to his world and stayd there until the GHW. So He could not have been anyone's apprentice since he was only on his homeworld as it is said in the book. That is why i remove Vitiate as an apprentice. (And remember to sign your post ;) )--ScorpiO 17:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)