The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Teek
- Originally nominated by: AdmirableAckbar
- Last featured on: October 22, 2007
- Changes since last review: diff
- Date placed on this page: June 19, 2011
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Phew. Menkooroo 12:19, July 9, 2011 (UTC)- Sorry; wish I had edited it as fast as Teek deserved. ~Savage
12:32, September 7, 2011 (UTC) - --Eyrezer 10:49, September 20, 2011 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 05:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
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- Bob
Should there be so much background on the Teek species in an article about the individual? We don't do that for other character articles, so I'd say it needs a bit of toning down at the start of the bio.- There's one. I'll get to the rest over the next few days. Menkooroo 14:29, August 28, 2011 (UTC)
- The play-by-play in the bio also needs toning down, especially once Noa comes into the picture.
- Toned it down a bunch. Feel free to tighten up anything else you think needs done.
It's still a bit too much, I think. Is it pertinent that Noa let Cindel sleep in his bed, for instance? I will take a closer look when I get a free second. ~Savage 21:58, August 31, 2011 (UTC)
- Toned it down a bunch. Feel free to tighten up anything else you think needs done.
We need a source for the ID of Charal as a Nightsister. I think The Illustrated Star Wars Universe is the appropriate source, though CSWE might work too.- Done.
The 3 ABY date needs a source. I know about comments from Chee about the Ewoks cartoon, but does anyone know of anything for the live-action TV movies?- I'm not sure if Leland ever has. I think it was probably extrapolation based on the cartoon dates. Wicket's Databank entry states that they're before ROTJ, so I've changed it to "prior to 4 ABY." That might be the best we can do.
"he used flames" -- Where did Teek get the flames?- Got it! Thanks Youtube.
Some POV problems in "Personality and traits".- Should be good now. Menkooroo 01:03, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
As the Star Tours stuff is canon (isn't it?), that bit needs to be moved somewhere into the Bio.- Done!
Also, some note of the adaptations should probably be added to BTS. ~Savage 14:46, August 1, 2011 (UTC)- Look good? Menkooroo 14:56, August 30, 2011 (UTC)
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