The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Rune Haako
- Originally nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis
- Last featured on: February 11, 2007
- Changes since last review: diff
- Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011
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- Kreivi
- Dates should be moved from image texts and subheads to the bio. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- All dates also needs better sourcing. For example, The Phantom Menace is not a proper source, since the date isn't clearly mentioned in the movie. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- If I can pitch in my two cents, I think it is fine sourcing the dates to the films. Plenty of quality articles do this. Hanzo Hasashi 13:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Links from image texts could be deleted. They are rather unnecessary. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- The intro needs major expanding, and it could be formated more, how to say... chronologically? Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
- P&t could also use some work. For example; "By the end of the Clone Wars, Rune appeared to be somewhat more courageous compared to most Neimoidians, as he tried to order Vader to stop his massacre of the Separatist leaders, rather than blubber mercy pleas like most of the other council members." Am I the only one who thinks this doesn't sound so rational? Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
- I suggest bugging Culator for the SWCE, as he apparently has that book. I had already updated his weight from H2H (pg. 16, by the way), but here's all the stuff concerning him:
- Height: 1.96 meters
- Weight: 89 kilograms
- Weapons: Poison-tipped knife
- Nervous Trade Federation lawyer far more confident in the courtroom than on the battlefield.
- Five Inquisitors voted to remove at Inq meeting 43. Article was probed. Menkooroo 00:35, July 24, 2011 (UTC)