Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Oss Wilum

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was unsuccessful'. Please do not modify it.</nowiki>

Oss Wilum

  • Originally nominated by: Greyman
  • Last featured on: January 28, 2008
  • Changes since last review: diff
  • Date placed on this page: July 26, 2011

(0 Inqs/0 Users/0 Total)

Support

Object

  1. Jujiggum
    • Just at first glance, the intro should definitely be expanded.
    • Various grammar/tense mistakes.
    • No quotes for the P&A or for Early life?
    • "Nothing is known as to how he died" is complete speculation.
    • Various other speculative/OR wording
    • Very poor linking.
    • Lots of missing context.
    • I'll give it a full read-through once these are addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • I'd most likely be the only one taking care of this, and since school will preclude my usually abundant Wook-time for the foreseeable future, I'm giving the O.K. to remove the nomination.—Tommy 9281 Wednesday, September 28, 2011, 04:28 UTC

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote Jugs' objections remain unfixed for over a month already. 1358 (Talk) 05:26, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Menkooroo 05:31, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote CC7567 (talk) 03:09, September 23, 2011 (UTC)