The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was unsuccessful'. Please do not modify it.</nowiki>
Oss Wilum
- Originally nominated by: Greyman
- Last featured on: January 28, 2008
- Changes since last review: diff
- Date placed on this page: July 26, 2011
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Support
Object
- Jujiggum
- Just at first glance, the intro should definitely be expanded.
- Various grammar/tense mistakes.
- No quotes for the P&A or for Early life?
- "Nothing is known as to how he died" is complete speculation.
- Various other speculative/OR wording
- Very poor linking.
- Lots of missing context.
- I'll give it a full read-through once these are addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:58, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
- I'd most likely be the only one taking care of this, and since school will preclude my usually abundant Wook-time for the foreseeable future, I'm giving the O.K. to remove the nomination.—Tommy 9281 Wednesday, September 28, 2011, 04:28 UTC