The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a re-featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Guardian of Forever
- Originally nominated by: Cull Tremayne
- Last featured on: 27 August, 2007
- Changes since last review: diff
- Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011
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Support
Object
- Jujiggum
- Lots of very speculative wording in the intro: "seemingly created," "For some unknown reason," "apparently killing," "seemingly invincible"
- "…whose technology and culture had been lost to time." Surely we can say something like, "whose technology and culture had been lost by <something BBY>."
- "When the Rebels first entered the massive structure…" What were the Rebels doing there? There's no preamble to this whatsoever.
- In the intro it's mentioned that the ancient race sealed the Guardian in the city; but in the body it isn't said who actually locked up the Guardian.
- More to come once these are fixed. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:17, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)
After three weeks, it doesn't seem like anyone is too interested in tackling this one. Menkooroo 00:29, July 22, 2011 (UTC)- Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:16, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:21, July 23, 2011 (UTC)