Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Gaeriel Captison

Gaeriel Captison

• Originally nominated by: Atarumaster88
• Last featured on: August 20, 2007
• Changes since last review: diff
• Date placed on this page: May 15, 2011

(2 Inqs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Captison "Gaeri" Captison looks good to go. =P Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 04:30, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
2. Menkooroo 07:25, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
3. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 07:36, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
4. --Eyrezer 05:28, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. What Trak Could Track
   • I went through with a copy-edit and the main thing that has stood out to me is that Coruscant Museum could do with at least a stub. And is there possibly anything else that could be added to T&a to expand it? If not, then ignore that bit. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 06:07, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
     • Will check into this week. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:48, June 27, 2011 (UTC)
       • Finally got around to this. Epic meh on the stub. I beefed up the T&A, and got rid of all the "Gaeriel"s to boot. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:13, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
2. Jeff
   • This article has aged pretty well. A few small things, though:
     • The opening of the body reads like it follows from the intro, rather than acting independently of it. Her first name doesn't appear in the body at all; I'd like to see a little rejigging so that the body reads like it's starting from scratch.
     • I'd like to see quotes for "Bakuran Independence," "Rise and fall," "Legacy," P&t, and P&a. Something from Truce could fit in the former and the two latter; C-3PO tells Luke about Malinza's birth and Pter's death in Assault at Selonia; something that Malinza says to Jaina in Refugee could fit in "Legacy."
     • A little bit of fodder for the "Legacy" section: Cracken's Thread Dossier indicates that Gaeriel's house is prepared to be given to Malinza once she's old enough to take it. A sentence or two about how Gaeriel's death caused a lasting hatred of the New Republic to blossom in Malinza's heart wouldn't be out of place, either. Menkooroo 11:10, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
       • All addressed, I believe. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 08:29, August 20, 2011 (UTC)