Wookieepedia:Re-featured article nominations/Battle of Grassy Plains

Battle of Grassy Plains

• Originally nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis
• Last featured on: September 17, 2007
• Changes since last review: diff

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1. Jeff
   • Seems like a relic of pre-Inq FAs. Just glancing at it reveals that:
     • The intro could be a lot longer.
     • There are too many images crowded too closely together.
     • The article itself is lacking context in a lot of places and could use some considerable expansion in general.
     • There's no way that the sources section is complete. Menkooroo 13:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
2. Trak is in a reviewing mood:
   • Overall
     • I did some minor copy-editing and adjusted some of the image positions (nixing one), but it still could use a bit of TLC, perhaps even a nixing of some more images. As Menk said, it could use more context. My biggest objection, though, is the prose. It feels choppy and prosey and could do with a very thorough copy-edit by someone with the appropriate sources. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 04:47, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Was placed on probation. Menkooroo 08:08, June 19, 2011 (UTC)