[19:03]Shayanomer: Alright then, welcome to Inqmoot 141
[19:03]Supreme Emperor: Hello all
[19:03]Shayanomer: Absentee notes
[19:04]Shayanomer: OOM
Keep Jay, Myhr Rho, Nar Hida/Legends
Kill the rest
Redux L'ulo L'ampar
Probe the rest OOM 224 21:12, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:04]Shayanomer: Macaroni
Notes per OOM but extend Lamproid, vote goes to Shay. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:43, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:04]Shayanomer: CC-8
Notes per Macaroni Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:17, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:04]Shayanomer: Imp
Keep Jay, Magaloof/Legends, Myhr Rho, Nar Hida/Legends, Raygar
Kill the rest of the old stuff
Redux L'ulo L'ampar - that guy can't catch a break.
Spare Cabbel/Legends (?)
Probe the rest of the new stuff
Give Shay my vote for anything else. Imperators II(Talk) 14:23, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:04]Shayanomer: SE
Just in case, notes per Imp. Shay can have my vote. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 15:58, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:04]Shayanomer: No notes from ecks
[19:04]Shayanomer: Old stuff
[19:04]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Biscuit_Baron
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Biscuit_Baron?oldid=11613658&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Biscuit_Baron
[19:04]Shayanomer: No changes, kill
[19:05]OOM: kill
[19:05]Supreme Emperor: Kill
[19:05]Shayanomer: Biscuit Baron killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jaller_Obrim
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jaller_Obrim?oldid=11613661&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Jaller_Obrim
[19:05]Shayanomer: No changes, kill
[19:05]OOM: kill
[19:05]Supreme Emperor: Kill
[19:06]Shayanomer: Jaller Obrim killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jay
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Jay?oldid=11613665&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Jay
Keep
[19:06]OOM: keep
[19:06]Supreme Emperor: Keep
[19:06]Shayanomer: Jay kept
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lamproid/Legends
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lamproid/Legends?oldid=11613667&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Lamproid/Legends
Extend
[19:06]Supreme Emperor: Extend
[19:06]OOM: extend
[19:06]Shayanomer: Lamproid extended
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lensi
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Lensi?oldid=11613669&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Lensi
No changes, kill
[19:07]OOM: kill
[19:07]Supreme Emperor: Kill
[19:07]Shayanomer: Lensi killed
[19:07]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mar_Barezz
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mar_Barezz?oldid=11613672&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Mar_Barezz
No changes, kill
[19:07]OOM: kill
[19:07]Supreme Emperor: Kill
[19:08]Shayanomer: Mar Barezz killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mar_Tuuk/Legends
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mar_Tuuk/Legends?oldid=11554526&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Mar_Tuuk/Legends
No changes since extension, kill
[19:08]OOM: kill
[19:08]Supreme Emperor: Kill
[19:09]Shayanomer: Mar Tuuk killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Magaloof/Legends
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Magaloof/Legends?oldid=11554528&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Magaloof/Legends
Underlinking issue still outstanding, extend
[19:09]OOM: extend
[19:09]Supreme Emperor: Extend
[19:09]Master Fredcerique: I’m here sorry
[19:09]OOM: hey Fred!
[19:09]Supreme Emperor: Ferd
[19:10]Shayanomer: Magaloof extended
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Myhr_Rho
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Myhr_Rho?oldid=11554532&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Myhr_Rho_(second_review)
Keep
[19:10]OOM: keep
[19:10]Master Fredcerique: Keep
[19:10]Supreme Emperor: Keep
[19:10]Shayanomer: Myhr Rho kept
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nar_Hida/Legends
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nar_Hida/Legends?oldid=11554535&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Nar_Hida/Legends
Keep
[19:10]OOM: keep
[19:10]Master Fredcerique: Keep
[19:10]Supreme Emperor: Keep
[19:11]Shayanomer: Nar Hida kept
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Pzob/Legends
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Pzob/Legends?oldid=11613676&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Pzob/Legends
no changes, kill
[19:11]Supreme Emperor: Have to go back down, thanks for hosting Shay🙂
[19:11]OOM: kill
[19:11]Supreme Emperor: Kill
[19:11]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:11]Shayanomer: Pzob killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Raygar
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Raygar?oldid=11613679&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Raygar_(second_review)
Keep
[19:11]OOM: enjoy the rest of the day, SE
[19:11]OOM: keep
[19:11]Supreme Emperor: I won't 🤣
[19:11]Master Fredcerique: Keep
[19:12]Shayanomer: Raygar kept
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Scimitar_assault_wing
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Scimitar_assault_wing?oldid=11554446&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Scimitar_assault_wing
no changes since extension, kill
[19:12]OOM: kill
[19:12]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:12]Shayanomer: Scimitar wing killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Slyther_Bushforb
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Slyther_Bushforb?oldid=11554538&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Slyther_Bushforb
no changes since extension, kill
[19:12]OOM: what kind of name is that
[19:12]OOM: kill
[19:13]JediMasterMacaroni: an awesome one
[19:13]Supreme Emperor: https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/834132215478222858/1013511571152060466/image0.gif
[19:13]OOM: lovely infobox image too
[19:13]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:13]Shayanomer: Slyther Bushforb killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tay_Vanis
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tay_Vanis?oldid=11613682&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Tay_Vanis
[19:13]Shayanomer: No changes, kill
[19:14]OOM: kill
[19:14]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:14]Shayanomer: Tay Vanis killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Theol_Drost
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Theol_Drost?oldid=11613688&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Theol_Drost
No changes, kill
[19:14]OOM: kill
[19:14]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:14]Shayanomer: Theol Drost killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tian_Chyler
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tian_Chyler?oldid=11554537&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Tian_Chyler_(second_review)
Rest of the issues unaddressed since extension, kill
[19:14]OOM: kill
[19:15]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:15]Shayanomer: Tian Chyler killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tyvokka/Legends
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tyvokka/Legends?oldid=11613698&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Tyvokka/Legends
no changes, kill
[19:15]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:15]OOM: kill
[19:15]Shayanomer: Tyvokka killed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Valara_Saar
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Valara_Saar?oldid=11613696&diff=cur
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Valara_Saar
no changes, kill
[19:15]OOM: kill
[19:15]Master Fredcerique: Kill
[19:15]Shayanomer: Valara Saar killed
[19:16]Shayanomer: New stuff
[19:16]OOM: yay
[19:16]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/L%27ulo_L%27ampar
In the 4 years since attaining status, this article has significantly increased in size thanks to newer sources, gaining ~23,000 bytes. Pending update aside, I'm recommending a Redux. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:44, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:16]Shayanomer: Redux
[19:16]Master Fredcerique: Redux
[19:16]OOM: poor L'ulo
[19:16]OOM: Redux
[19:16]Master Fredcerique: Can’t catch a break haha
[19:16]Shayanomer: Lulo reduxed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Hugo_Bartyn
I'm not familiar with the source, but I don't think that Star Wars Gamer specifies that Bartyn was born circa 583 BBY and died circa 499 BBY.
BTS doesn't contain references.
Some paragraphs could be merged.
Images could be added.
Missing an equipment section. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol.svg 21:41, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:16]OOM: probe
[19:16]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:16]Shayanomer: Hugo Bartyn probed
[19:17]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Cabbel/Legends
I have decided to put this myself on the Inq meeting page, as on Discord it's been brought up that this should be a ducktest case of Cabbel on the left. My own thought was the CCG calling Cabbel a recent graduate of the Officer's Candidate School in 3 ABY would seem to make it more recent than 1 BBY. It's been brought up that recent is a relative term that could easily be interpreted as 4 years ago, based on the reader's point of view. At the end of the day, it is 4 years chronologically prior that we're talking about in-universe. I would say that a 3 ABY case of reused footage on the Tyrant would be a more obvious duck test scenario. Note also that Star Wars: Jedi Knight II: Jedi Outcast has Cabbel's model used for Imperial officer NPCs in the story mode. In-universe, this means there's literally confirmation that there's more than one Imperial officer who has that exact appearance... Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:28, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
If the Inq decision is that the X-Wing case is a duck test situation of Cabbel, with "recent" being quite possibly 4+ years ago, I present this rewrite. 21:27, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
From talking to more than one other user, rewrote the contents of the aforementioned sandbox link. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:08, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
Officer's Candidate School is a linking status article which I made a related change to, FWIW. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:20, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
Oh, in case not obvious, rewrote article on 11th. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:15, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
Seeing Imperators being unsure, for clarity, this article is in the final state, from my reevaluating the X-wing footage. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:26, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
Thoughts?
[19:17]Shayanomer: I went through the rewrite earlier and it looks fine
[19:18]OOM: linking Hanzo's rewrite here https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Cabbel/Legends?type=revision&diff=11654979&oldid=11578551
[19:18]OOM: yeah it looks alright
[19:18]OOM: not big enough for a redux
[19:19]Master Fredcerique: Spare
[19:19]Shayanomer: Spare
[19:19]OOM: at a glance, there are a few dupe links and images can be enlarged
[19:19]Master Fredcerique: Do we want to just fix those real quick?
[19:19]Shayanomer: Copy-edit can cover those
[19:19]OOM: yeah they're fairly easy fixes
[19:19]OOM: I see nothing else
[19:19]OOM: spare
[19:20]Shayanomer: Cabbel spared
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Celly_Organa/Legends
The link to Celly Organa's husband has been removed per the corresponding Trash compactor entry, but it appears that the textual content of this article will also need to be amended accordingly. Imperators II(Talk) 07:20, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
That should do the trick. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:03, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
Seeing lots of fluff not really relevant to this article (e.g. Too much context for Alderaan, Breha's original surname, House of Organa origins)
Let's see a proper date note for the death date, and the HoloNet date.
It looks like the HoloNet entry needs an Mo tag next to it, it doesn't really count as an appearance.
Infobox-exclusive information.
Would like to see paragraph breaks and an Equipment section.
Missing comic publication date.
Check audiobooks.
Missing Mediacat. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 17:34, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:20]OOM: probe
[19:20]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:20]Shayanomer: Celly Organa probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Comet_(clone_trooper)/Legends
Infobox bulleted list should only go one bullet deep.
Clone traits needs a note.
Improperly-sourced dates.
Images: Needs more illustration; digitize comic-book image.
BTS: Missing publication dates; redundant information. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:54, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:20]OOM: probe
[19:20]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:20]Shayanomer: Comet probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dani
Infobox-exclusive information
Images: Digitize comic book images; needs more illustration; enlarge existing thumbnails.
How to resolve the eye color situation: Pick one eye color, get rid of the speculatory ref note, note the discrepancy in the BTS, and specify which color the article follows.
Ref 8 needs {{WizardsCite}}.
Resolved. NBDani Team Fireball.svgYeager's Repairs 00:04, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
Underlinking.
Document stats from this card.
Can use an Equipment section.
BTS: No publication dates; redundant information.
Also, some of it is unsourced. The referencing needs to be more specific as well, i.e. don't just cramp several refs at the end of a paragraph. OOM 224 15:58, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
No Mediacat. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:53, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
Resolved. NBDani Team Fireball.svgYeager's Repairs 00:04, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
Needs more sectioning. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:55, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
Probe
[19:20]
BOT
Wiki-Bot: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Template:WizardsCite
[19:20]OOM: probe
[19:20]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:20]Shayanomer: Dani probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Drikl_Lecersen
Infobox-exclusive hair color.
Improper date sourcing.
Duplicate links.
Many subjects introduced without proper context.
Needs more illustration and sectioning
Needs relevant captions on existing images (e.g. Why is there an image of Caedus here? Simply stating who he is does not help).
Many large paragraphs to be split up.
BTS has unsourced and redundant information.
Check abridged Legacy of the Force audiobooks. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:13, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
[19:20]OOM: probe
[19:21]Shayanomer: probe
[19:21]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:21]Shayanomer: Drikl Lecersen probed
[19:22]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Reaper_(Executor-class)
Note visually-discernable starship traits, such as engines.
Eliminate unnecessary double and triple refs.
History needs sectioning and images.
No Mediacat.
Looks like Samonic addressed the above four, not sure about the abridged audiobook though. I may be able to check before the meeting. VergenceScatter (talk) 23:37, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
Check abridged audiobook. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 16:58, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
Some are still unaddressed, probe
[19:22]OOM: probe
[19:22]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:22]Shayanomer: Reaper probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Barukka
This addition has yet to be verified and added to the article if necessary.
Infobox-exclusive information.
We do not need to specify if the character is no longer affiliated with a group within the infobox.
Needs illustration.
Dates need other sources.
Not all subjects have context.
General underlinking.
Quote attributions should not contain links if the subjects are mentioned in the body.
Unsourced BTS with redundant information.
Check abridged audiobook. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 19:27, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:22]OOM: probe
[19:22]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:22]Shayanomer: Barukka probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Kiro
Images: Digitize comic images; enlarge existing images; more illustration.
Duplicate links.
General underlinking.
Eliminate unnecessary multi-refs.
Some subjects are missing context.
Needs more sectioning.
Documents Topps card stats.
Can use an Equipment section.
Improperly-sourced BTS.
No Mediacat. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:49, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:22]OOM: probe
[19:22]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:23]Shayanomer: Kiro probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Svivreni
Infobox-exclusive information.
Almost all of the dates are improperly-sourced.
Multi-refs aren't required if one source can support all the information.
Multiple instances of refs citing multiple sources together.
One Adventure Journal reference that just links the magazine instead of an article within it, and another one without the appropriate citation template.
Redlink.
Multiple subjects without proper context.
Eliminate page and chapter numbers from referencing.
Svivren's location ref needs additional elaboration.
Cite individual comic issues instead of the whole series.
Unsourced BTS.
Check abridged audiobooks.
Provide a link for the Topps card. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:07, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:23]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:23]OOM: probe
[19:23]Shayanomer: Svivreni probed
https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Tyro_Caladian
Duplicate links.
Dates are not sourced properly.
Can use more illustration.
A number of subjects have no context.
Eliminate unnecessary multi-refs and page and chapter numbers.
BTS: Original research; unsourced information; narrative quotes should not be added. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 14:16, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
probe
[19:23]OOM: probe
[19:23]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:24]Shayanomer: Tyro Caladian probed
[19:24]Shayanomer: Bin time
[19:24]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Icehead?t=20220825172547
Fact tags
probe
[19:24]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:24]OOM: probe
[19:24]Shayanomer: Icehead probed
[19:24]Master Fredcerique: Those are embarrassing to find on status articles
[19:25]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vana_Dorja?t=20220818131744
Fact tag
probe
[19:25]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:25]OOM: Ewoks article. Macaroni might be interested
[19:25]OOM: probe
[19:25]Shayanomer: Vana Dorja probed
[19:26]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mezhan_Kwaad?t=20220801052711
Fact tags
probe
[19:26]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:26]OOM: probe
[19:26]Shayanomer: Mezhan Kwaad probed
[19:26]Shayanomer: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Arwen_Cohl?t=20220707121923
Fact tag
probe
[19:26]OOM: probe
[19:26]Master Fredcerique: Probe
[19:26]Shayanomer: Arwen Cohl probed
[19:26]Shayanomer: That's everything
[19:26]OOM: \o/
[19:26]Shayanomer: Anything you would like to discuss?
[19:26]Master Fredcerique: We did it!
[19:27]OOM: nothing from me
[19:27]Master Fredcerique: Not that I can think of off the top of my head
[19:27]Master Fredcerique: Sorry I was a tad late!
[19:27]Shayanomer: Cool, that wraps up Inqmoot 141, thanks for attending
[19:27]OOM: thanks for hosting Shay!
[19:28]OOM: that was good
[19:28]OOM: who's on paperwork?
[19:28]Shayanomer: Preem
[19:28]Master Fredcerique: G’bless hahaha
[19:28]OOM: heaves a sigh of relief