[2021-02-20 18:19:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Welcome to Inqmoot 123
[2021-02-20 18:20:08] <Tommy-Macaroni> OK, staring with the old stuff
[2021-02-20 18:20:08] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_501st_stormtrooper
[2021-02-20 18:20:08] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686556/cur
[2021-02-20 18:20:08] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Unidentified_501st_stormtrooper
[2021-02-20 18:20:08] <Tommy-Macaroni> No changes
[2021-02-20 18:20:08] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:20:14] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:20:17] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:20:19] <Tommy-Macaroni> Unidentified 501st stormtrooper killed
[2021-02-20 18:20:19] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Generis/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:20:19] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686557/cur
[2021-02-20 18:20:19] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Generis/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:20:19] <Tommy-Macaroni> No changes
[2021-02-20 18:20:19] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:20:22] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:20:22] <Toprawa> Wait
[2021-02-20 18:20:32] <Toprawa> Please make sure to note absentee votes, since we need four votes to kill things
[2021-02-20 18:20:52] <Tommy-Macaroni> Oh yes, sorry
[2021-02-20 18:21:05] <MasterFred> Tommy entire groove has been thrown off. XD
[2021-02-20 18:21:06] <Tommy-Macaroni> Fred has ecks' and I have SE and Imperators'
[2021-02-20 18:21:35] <Toprawa> Thanks :P
[2021-02-20 18:22:04] <Toprawa> Kill on Generis then
[2021-02-20 18:22:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> OK so, Generis
[2021-02-20 18:22:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> No changes
[2021-02-20 18:22:14] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:22:14] <MasterFred> Tommy entire groove has been thrown off. XD
[2021-02-20 18:22:19] <MasterFred> oops
[2021-02-20 18:22:20] <MasterFred> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:30] <Tommy-Macaroni> Generis/Legends Killed
[2021-02-20 18:22:30] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rugosa/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:22:30] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686559/cur
[2021-02-20 18:22:30] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Rugosa/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:22:30] <Tommy-Macaroni> Just bot stuff
[2021-02-20 18:22:30] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:22:34] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:35] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> Rugosa/Legends Killed
[2021-02-20 18:22:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rango_Tel
[2021-02-20 18:22:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686558/cur
[2021-02-20 18:22:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Rango_Tel_(second_review)
[2021-02-20 18:22:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> No change
[2021-02-20 18:22:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:22:42] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:43] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:47] <Tommy-Macaroni> Rango Tel Killed
[2021-02-20 18:22:47] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Duron_Qel-Droma
[2021-02-20 18:22:47] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686560/cur
[2021-02-20 18:22:47] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Duron_Qel-Droma
[2021-02-20 18:22:47] <Tommy-Macaroni> Just a category change
[2021-02-20 18:22:47] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:22:49] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:51] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Duron Qel-Droma Killed
[2021-02-20 18:22:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Oron_Kira
[2021-02-20 18:22:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686562/cur
[2021-02-20 18:22:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Oron_Kira
[2021-02-20 18:22:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Just a couple of unrelated link fixes, which amusingly introduce a dup link
[2021-02-20 18:22:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:22:55] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:56] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:22:59] <Tommy-Macaroni> Oron Kira Killed
[2021-02-20 18:22:59] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Buick
[2021-02-20 18:22:59] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686561/cur
[2021-02-20 18:22:59] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Buick
[2021-02-20 18:22:59] <Tommy-Macaroni> Just bot stuff
[2021-02-20 18:22:59] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:23:02] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:03] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> Buick Killed
[2021-02-20 18:23:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Yam%27rii/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:23:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686566/cur
[2021-02-20 18:23:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Yam%27rii/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:23:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> No changes
[2021-02-20 18:23:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:23:06] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:07] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> Yam'rii/Legends Killed
[2021-02-20 18:23:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Han_Solo%27s_sky_house
[2021-02-20 18:23:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686563/cur
[2021-02-20 18:23:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Han_Solo%27s_sky_house
[2021-02-20 18:23:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> No changes
[2021-02-20 18:23:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:23:12] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:13] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:15] <Tommy-Macaroni> Han Solo's sky house Killed
[2021-02-20 18:23:15] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dusty_Duck
[2021-02-20 18:23:15] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686564/cur
[2021-02-20 18:23:15] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/Dusty_Duck
[2021-02-20 18:23:15] <Tommy-Macaroni> Just an unrelated formatting fix
[2021-02-20 18:23:15] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:23:18] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:19] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Dusty Duck Killed
[2021-02-20 18:23:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/TIE/sh_VIP_shuttle
[2021-02-20 18:23:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Special:Diff/9686565/cur
[2021-02-20 18:23:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Inq/TIE/sh_VIP_shuttle
[2021-02-20 18:23:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Just bot stuff
[2021-02-20 18:23:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> I know this is yours Tope, but from the sound of it, it would be going to Redux anyway, so it probably makes the most sense to Kill³ this now and then you can renominate it if and when you wish
[2021-02-20 18:23:30] <Toprawa> Kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:32] <Toprawa> No worries
[2021-02-20 18:23:35] <MasterFred> kill
[2021-02-20 18:23:35] <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill³
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> TIE/sh VIP shuttle Killed
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> OK, moving on to new things
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mantis_Syndicate
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced Bts.
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Redlink.
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Needs some major subsectioning. MasterFredCommerce Guild.svg(talk) 21:54, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:23:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:23:50] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:23:52] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:23:57] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe^3, sorry
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Mantis Syndicate Probed
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Darth_Maladi
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Refs 2 and 35 needs to be formatted properly with {{Cite_web}} and backup links.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Both have cite_web, but I can't create backup links because it appears that neither pages exists anymore.VergenceScatter (talk) 21:38, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Never mind, Nano found old backups. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:51, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Article can use multiple paragraph breaks to fit the Oasis skin.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> "Early life" can use an image (e.g. Devaron).
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Done.VergenceScatter (talk) 21:38, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> "Sith Imperial War," "Seeking Skywalker," and "Personality and traits" can all be subsectioned further.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Can use an Equipment section.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced BTS information. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 15:15, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> All of the above should be addressed. VergenceScatter (talk) 23:37, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Include all relevant fields in Cite_web instead of just the URL, title, and backup (e.g. "work," "date," "author").
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> There are unsourced paragraphs now.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> More quotes can be added now, and they should be below section headers.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> "Personality and traits" can use better sectioning.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> No space for Equipment image.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS:
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Hosts redundant information about further Appearances.
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing full comic release date. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 10:45, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Vergence seems to have done some stuff, but Shay still has more issues not addressed here
[2021-02-20 18:24:25] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:24:35] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:24:38] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Darth Maladi Probed
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Swokes_Swokes/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Inconsistent information between infobox and body; different height ranges specified.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Article can benefit from more subsections and images.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Duplicate links.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced BTS information.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Appearances need to list individual issues of The Phantom Menace comic and manga instead of just linking the whole series.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> 1st appearance should go to the novel, which also isn't formatted properly in the section.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Abridged The Phantom Menace audiobook should be investigated for a mention and unabridged audiobook should presumably be added to Appearances.
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Rework referencing to eliminate page and chapter numbers. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 13:48, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:24:49] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:24:52] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Swokes Swokes/Legends Probed
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/CC-1119/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Double reference for death date is unnecessary.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Homeworld and height require a separate note.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Can use a lot of subsectioning and paragraph breaks.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Temuera Morrison voicing all helmeted clones is not supported by the Databank.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced BTS information.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Appearances section needs to list Revenge of the Sith adaptations individually.
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Check Dark Lord: The Rise of Darth Vader and Revenge of the Sith audiobooks for mentions. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 11:24, 27 January 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:24:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:24:58] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:00] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> CC-1119/Legends Probed
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Gaeriel_Captison
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> None of the BBY/ABY dates appear to be referenced correctly
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> The GrS date needs to be removed from the infobox
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking (and in some cases overlinking) throughout
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> The article body's images need to come up with more attractive captions than just "Gaeriel Captison"
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> The article could benefit from more images overall, such as indirect ones describing the Bakura incident and its players
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> File:Captison with Kurtzen.jpg has some background artifacts than can be cleaned up
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> Could probably use an Equipment section
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> Add audiobooks to Appearances
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> Lucasfilm Fan Club Magazine 21 in the Sources should presumably be able to use the relevant citation template and link to a specific article of that magazine issue
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> Ref 12 should use a citation template. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:23, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:02] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:25:07] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:08] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Gaeriel Captison Probed
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Hindane_Darcc/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Suspected missing refs in second and fourth paragraphs of the body.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Underlinking.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Duplicate links.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Grammatical errors.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Missing context for several subjects in the body.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Improper link formatting: see Wookieepedia:Manual of Style#Formatting.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Extraneous detail in BTS.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS needs to note the origin of the name "Hindane."
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> File links need correct formatting.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Legends announcement needs to utilise the proper template.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Judging from the images, there's enough to warrant an equipment section.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> I'm fairly sure ref notes for some of these dates are needed. Speaking of, we can also say when Palpatine died.
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> The article seems confused as to whether Darcc captained the Executrix or not. On the Executrix doesn't specifically state he was, and instead implied that Tarkin was the ship's captain. However, in the next section, it's stated "Darcc was reassigned from captaining the Executrix." So, which is it? Tommy-Macaroni 13:59, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Oh, and Dark Lord: The Rise of Darth Vader's audiobooks need to be checked for possible appearances. Tommy-Macaroni 14:01, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:11] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:25:18] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:19] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Hindane Darcc/Legends Probed
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Erisi_Dlarit
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information.
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Dates are not sourced properly.
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Can use more sectioning and several paragraph breaks to fit the Oasis skin.
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Some of the image captions can connect to the article better.
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section.
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Unsourced BTS information.
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Check and add X-Wing audiobooks to Appearances. Shayanomer Din Djarin's clan.svg (talk) 12:08, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:20] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:25:24] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:24] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Erisi Dlarit Probed
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Skipping MK-09 as GT has addressed those issues
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Onara_Kuat
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> I believe we can see her hair color reasonably enough to at least call it dark, if not brown
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Skin color can be specified in infobox and article body
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Not all, and possibly none, of the BBY dates are referenced correctly
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Bio thumbnail image can be enlarged and needs to format its punctuation correctly
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> I find both Bio subsection titles to be lacking. The first is simply unclear as to what it's intending to mean exactly. No one in the world is going to know what "Lenoan to Danu" means until they've read through the subection, when it should be the exact opposite. The subsection title should clearly introduce the reader to what they're about to read and draw them in. And "Trouble" is such a
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> mundane and lame subsection title. Every Star Wars character ever has "trouble." Come up with something better.
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> P/T says "During her tenure, Onara was seen as a prime example of the cutthroat and labyrinth nature of Kuati politics..." Who or what saw her as this? If this can't be qualified according to the source, it should be rewritten.
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Remove duplicate link in BTS quote caption. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:34, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> Prove
[2021-02-20 18:25:34] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:35] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:38] <Tommy-Macaroni> *probe^3
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Onara Kuat Probed
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ottegru_Grey
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Skin color can be specified in infobox and article body
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> The BBY date in the image caption is not self-sourcing, and the one used in the article body is not referenced correctly
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Bio thumbnail image can be enlarged and needs to format its punctuation correctly
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Could use an Equipment section
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS unsourced and can remove instances of Sources list regurgitation
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Format Tinker, Tailor correctly in citation template. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:34, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:44] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:25:49] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:49] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Ottegru Grey Probed
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sic-Six/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> General underlinking throughout
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Infobox-exclusive information
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> I'd say the Biology section could probably be subsectioned for a neater organizational layout
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> There are several instances of multiple end-sentence reference, like "all covered by a hard, chitinous carapace that was generally black.[1][3][2]" or "The head had four pairs of eyes,[1][3][2]". Why is this necessary? If individual parts of a sentence need to be referenced, then they should be done so, not have all the references slapped onto the end of the sentence. Otherwise, unless a claim
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> is particularly disputed or something, multiple references like this is totally unnecessary. And any that do need to be used should be organized in numerial order, such as [1][2][3], not [1][3][2]
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Remove duplicate link in article-body image caption, and format BTS image caption punctuation correctly
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> BTS is mostly unsourced and should remove any instances of Sources list regurgitation
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Appearances/Sources needs to indicate whatever the first appearance/first mention, etc. was
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Refs 10 and 12 need to use Cite web and provide backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:34, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
[2021-02-20 18:25:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe³
[2021-02-20 18:25:58] <Toprawa> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:26:01] <MasterFred> Probe
[2021-02-20 18:26:06] <Tommy-Macaroni> Sic-Six/Legends Probed
[2021-02-20 18:26:10] <Tommy-Macaroni> Looking in the bin, TX-828 still has a week until his source is a month old
[2021-02-20 18:26:16] <Tommy-Macaroni> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Proto_One?t=20210123191052
[2021-02-20 18:26:16] <Tommy-Macaroni> This has a {{Fact}} tag
[2021-02-20 18:26:16] <Tommy-Macaroni> Also has some dup links, could probably use subsectioning, dates appear unsourced, multiple refs for statements seems excessive
[2021-02-20 18:26:44] <MasterFred> Nobody tell AV
[2021-02-20 18:26:55] <Tommy-Macaroni> I think this is Menk's
[2021-02-20 18:26:58] <Toprawa> GT will probably fix it
[2021-02-20 18:27:05] <Tommy-Macaroni> Shall we bother?
[2021-02-20 18:27:12] <Toprawa> If you listed it on the meeting page next month, I bet GT fixed it
[2021-02-20 18:27:18] <Toprawa> fixes*
[2021-02-20 18:27:28] <Toprawa> So I'm ok with passing over it for now
[2021-02-20 18:27:36] <Tommy-Macaroni> Right, I'll probably do that for the next meeting so at least it's done
[2021-02-20 18:27:38] <Tommy-Macaroni> Spare
[2021-02-20 18:27:44] <Toprawa> Spare
[2021-02-20 18:27:55] <MasterFred> Spare
[2021-02-20 18:27:57] <Tommy-Macaroni> Proto One spared
[2021-02-20 18:28:01] <Tommy-Macaroni> Does anyone have anything else?
[2021-02-20 18:28:16] <Toprawa> Not for articles
[2021-02-20 18:28:20] <MasterFred> Negatory
[2021-02-20 18:28:26] <Tommy-Macaroni> OK, moving on to discussion items. Tope’s up first.
[2021-02-20 18:29:03] <Toprawa> Right
[2021-02-20 18:29:12] <Toprawa> We have this page https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Featured_articles/Essay
[2021-02-20 18:29:26] <Toprawa> It was originally written by former Inq Cull Tremayne and adopted as an official Inq/FA page at some point
[2021-02-20 18:29:46] <Toprawa> It was pretty interesting when it was still being maintained, but the majority of this page is exceedingly obsolete
[2021-02-20 18:29:56] <Toprawa> Even though a select people still update their own personal stats
[2021-02-20 18:30:16] <Toprawa> We really don't use it anymore, and the essay itself hasn't been updated in 10 years
[2021-02-20 18:30:46] <Toprawa> I am proposing we move it back to its original place as a Cull Tremayne subpage, which would then get redirected back to his userpage as an idle user
[2021-02-20 18:30:52] <Toprawa> Thus removing it as an official Inq/FA page
[2021-02-20 18:31:15] <Toprawa> a select few people*
[2021-02-20 18:31:41] <Tommy-Macaroni> Yeah, totally agree. It's fun to keep up with but it's also a relic
[2021-02-20 18:31:57] <MasterFred> Yeah, most of the FAs linked on this aren't even FAs anymore. haha
[2021-02-20 18:32:04] <Tommy-Macaroni> Excellent
[2021-02-20 18:32:12] <Tommy-Macaroni> Vote to move [[Wookieepedia:Featured articles/Essay]] to a Cull Tremayne subpage and then redirect that to [[User:Cull Tremayne]]. Also remove the link from all official Inq pages and templates:
[2021-02-20 18:32:12] <Tommy-Macaroni> Support³
[2021-02-20 18:32:18] <Toprawa> Support
[2021-02-20 18:32:25] <MasterFred> Support
[2021-02-20 18:32:43] <Tommy-Macaroni> Motion to move [[Wookieepedia:Featured articles/Essay]] to a Cull Tremayne subpage and then redirect that to [[User:Cull Tremayne]]. Also remove the link from all official Inq pages and template passes
[2021-02-20 18:32:49] <Tommy-Macaroni> OK, now my turn
[2021-02-20 18:33:06] <Tommy-Macaroni> So our current system for Reduxing is a little odd. Redux serves as an extension of probation, but if an article is Reduxed without prior probation, its probation page is only created after the Redux review has concluded. On the other hand, if an article already under probation is Reduxed, then it obviously already has a probation page. This creates a disparity with articles undergoing the Redux
[2021-02-20 18:33:06] <Tommy-Macaroni> process, with some having a probation page and some not.
[2021-02-20 18:33:23] <Tommy-Macaroni> This results in redlinks appearing in the {{FAredux}} templates on some articles, eg https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Waxer/Legends
[2021-02-20 18:33:34] <Tommy-Macaroni> I simply propose that for articles undergoing Redux without a prior probation, we create the probation page at the same time as the Redux page, not after it has been archived.
[2021-02-20 18:33:40] <Tommy-Macaroni> This means all Redux pages will have an accompanying probation page, we won’t have any of those nasty redlinks in {{FAredux}}, everything will be a lot more uniform, and our archiving instructions will be a lot simpler.
[2021-02-20 18:33:45] <Tommy-Macaroni> I’ve made a little flowchart to hopefully simplify what I’m proposing: https://imgur.com/a/QqQczNP
[2021-02-20 18:33:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> If this passes, I’ll rewrite the relevant sections on [[Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/instructions]] to reflect this and update all FAs currently under Redux so they have a probation page no matter what.
[2021-02-20 18:33:53] <Tommy-Macaroni> That is all.
[2021-02-20 18:34:02] <Toprawa> As long as you explain what needs to be done step by step on the instructions page, I'm good :P
[2021-02-20 18:34:08] <Toprawa> Because this stuff confuses the crap out of me sometimes :P
[2021-02-20 18:34:24] <Tommy-Macaroni> This will make the instructions much more clear, so yeah :P
[2021-02-20 18:34:26] <MasterFred> Yeah, just make it clear. haha
[2021-02-20 18:34:41] <Tommy-Macaroni> Vote to modify FA instructions so that if a page is Reduxed without prior probation, its probation page is created at the same time as its Redux page:
[2021-02-20 18:34:41] <Tommy-Macaroni> Support³
[2021-02-20 18:34:48] <Toprawa> Support
[2021-02-20 18:34:49] <MasterFred> Support
[2021-02-20 18:34:50] <Tommy-Macaroni> Motion to modify FA instructions so that if a page is Reduxed without prior probation, its probation page is created at the same time as its Redux page passes
[2021-02-20 18:34:54] <Tommy-Macaroni> Any other items from anyone?
[2021-02-20 18:34:58] <Toprawa> Nope
[2021-02-20 18:35:00] <MasterFred> None from me
[2021-02-20 18:35:03] <Tommy-Macaroni> OK, excellent.
[2021-02-20 18:35:03] <Tommy-Macaroni> Tope is on paperwork and schedules Meeting 124
[2021-02-20 18:35:03] <Tommy-Macaroni> Thus concluded Meeting 123, thanks all for coming