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Second Battle of Empress Teta
Things to do
- Title is conjecture so needs appropriate tag and wording tweaks.
Date needs mention in intro and body.- Done.
Infobox says it took place on Koros Major, rest of the article says it was on Empress Teta. Seems to be same thing, but consistency please.- Done.
Infobox has stuff that the rest of the article doesn't mention.More to come possibly when these have been fixed.1358 (Talk) 22:28, April 29, 2011 (UTC)"The battle took place almost immediately after another mission in which…" not sure it's appropriate to say "another mission" since this event wasn't a mission.- s/another/a/ done.
Context on Ulic. A fellow Jedi Knight?- Done.
Context on the Krath.- Done.
"…from the Krath capital." Article for this capital?- I think it refers to Cinnagar, it's planet covered by city/cities.
Context on Exar Kun.- Done.
"…the two ex-Jedi decided to join forces…" It's not clear who the second ex-Jedi is; this could probably be fixed by just contextifying Kun per the previous objection.- Indeed, it should be clear now.
- That's it from the intro. 1358 (Talk) 17:15, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
"Presenting their shared belief that Ulic was indeed falling to the dark side, the Knights presented a new plan to the Masters aimed at extracting Ulic from the Krath." Present gets repetitive.- Repetition reduced.
Context on Arca Jeth.- Done.
"…during the previous Battle of Deneba…" Seeing as that battle's title is conjectural, this should be reworded.1358 (Talk) 17:31, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
Removal of FA status
- Placed on probation per Meeting 40.
- Status kept per Meeting 41.
Comments
- This should be done, only missing bit is confirmation if Battle of Deneba is also conjecture and thus the link should be reworded in the article. –Tm_T (Talk) 21:43, March 15, 2011 (UTC)