Wookieepedia:Inq/Rune Haako (second review)

Rune Haako

• Status: Featured Article

Things to do

• Needs an update from the Star Wars Character Encyclopedia
• Outstanding issues from the RFAN page (objections originally left by Kreivi Wolter):

1. • Dates should be moved from image texts and subheads to the bio. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done. Thefourdotelipsis 04:47, August 25, 2011 (UTC)
   • All dates also needs better sourcing. For example, The Phantom Menace is not a proper source, since the date isn't clearly mentioned in the movie. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
     • As I said in the failed RFA nom, I think it is fine sourcing them to TPM. So many quality articles do this. Hanzo Hasashi 21:06, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
   • Links from image texts could be deleted. They are rather unnecessary. Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done. Thefourdotelipsis 04:47, August 25, 2011 (UTC)
   • The intro needs major expanding, and it could be formated more, how to say... chronologically? Kreivi Wolter 17:27, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
     • I've beefed it up, but I'm not sure... is that up to modern standards? Thefourdotelipsis 06:48, August 25, 2011 (UTC)
   • P&t could also use some work. For example; "By the end of the Clone Wars, Rune appeared to be somewhat more courageous compared to most Neimoidians, as he tried to order Vader to stop his massacre of the Separatist leaders, rather than blubber mercy pleas like most of the other council members." Menkooroo 00:21, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

• Needs a copy-edit and a cleanup per meeting 44. 1358 ^(Talk) 06:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
  • I took care of the infobox (reloaded), {{Ref}} tags, and some cleanup linking work in the intro JangFett ^(Talk) 12:28, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

• Article placed on probation per Meeting 43.
• Article granted extended probation per Meeting 44. (see above) 1358 ^(Talk) 06:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Trak Nar provided the necessary info from the Head-to-Head Tag Teams:
  • Height: 1.96 meters
  • Weight: 89 kilograms
  • Weapons: Poison-tipped knife
  • Nervous Trade Federation lawyer far more confident in the courtroom than on the battlefield. Menkooroo 00:21, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
• Note: If this ultimately passes review and keeps its status, it should be placed on the FA queue to be re-featured. Menkooroo 00:37, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Everything else I could pull out of H2H for Rune:
    • Special move: Stab-in-the-back
    • In the scenario, Rune is astride a falumpaset. I doubt that's of any use, same with the outcome of the battle, which involves Rune getting bucked and trampled. Not sure out the "special move" will help, but if you can find a use for it, awesome. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 05:05, October 22, 2011 (UTC)