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Laigrek

See nom page. I'm only repeating this here 'cause 4dot made me. :-P - Lord Hydronium 10:42, 15 April 2007 (UTC)
- Most of this has been addressed; see question on nom page.-Solus^{(Bird of Prey)} 15:07, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
  - Addressed. -Solus^{(Bird of Prey)} 23:36, 3 May 2007 (UTC)
Too short. Only in the 800s. --Eyrezer 03:26, 11 May 2007 (UTC)

~~Cut content needs to be taken out of prose. .... 00:13, 10 April 2007 (UTC)~~
Done. -Solus^{(Bird of Prey)} 00:32, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
Grammar and mechanics (esp. comma use) need some work. I already fixed quite a few things, but someone more knowledgeable in KOTOR will need to. I'm particularly looking at this sentence: "She had been in the training stage when the attack on Dantooine had been destroyed." ...I have no idea what to do with that. Gonk ^(Gonk!) 17:08, 4 May 2007 (UTC)
Oh, that is awful. Will do copyedit when I get a chance. -Solus^{(Bird of Prey)} 18:54, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

Failed rule 17, 1000 words. Archived and moved to GA nom page. --Eyrezer 05:51, 18 May 2007 (UTC)