Wookieepedia:Inq/Guardian of Forever (second review)

Guardian of Forever

• Status: Featured Article

Things to do

• Outstanding issues from the RFAN page (objections originally left by Jonjedigrandmaster):

1. • Lots of very speculative wording in the intro: "seemingly created," "For some unknown reason," "apparently killing," "seemingly invincible"
   • "…whose technology and culture had been lost to time." Surely we can say something like, "whose technology and culture had been lost by <something BBY>."
   • "When the Rebels first entered the massive structure…" What were the Rebels doing there? There's no preamble to this whatsoever.
   • In the intro it's mentioned that the ancient race sealed the Guardian in the city; but in the body it isn't said who actually locked up the Guardian. Menkooroo 00:23, July 24, 2011 (UTC)

• LG issues.
• Bts needs expansion.

Removal of FA status

• Probed at meeting 44. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:23, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Note: If this ultimately passes review and keeps its status, it should be placed on the FA queue to be re-featured. Menkooroo 00:37, July 24, 2011 (UTC)