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Gaeriel Captison
Things to do
- Still needs some added detail on early TaB and possibly more expansion all over; Cull will post more specific objections soon.
Removal of FA status
- Placed on probation per Meeting 20.
- FA status kept per Meeting 21.
Comments
- I've squeezed out a bunch more detail from TaB, kicked up to 30.5 KB and referenced the succession box to boot, except for one thing, which I need to check on, since I missed doing that before. More specific objections would be extremely helpful. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 20:28, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
- Can't complain about the level of detail you've put there. Any way we can get the same sort of expansion for the summary of Assault at Selonia? Also, the "Battle of Bakura" section is now disproportionately long compared to the other sections. Any way you can split up that huge block of text into smaller sections? It would definitely help the layout. Cull Tremayne 04:22, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- Re-sectioned parts of it. There's not much more I can do that directly pertains to Gaeriel on Assault at Selonia. I already covered that earlier, but basically, all she does is re-meet Luke, help him get the fleet and go to the Corellian system. If you have a specific thing you want buffed, let me know, but I'm happy with the level of detail. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 18:13, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
- Re-sectioned parts of it. There's not much more I can do that directly pertains to Gaeriel on Assault at Selonia. I already covered that earlier, but basically, all she does is re-meet Luke, help him get the fleet and go to the Corellian system. If you have a specific thing you want buffed, let me know, but I'm happy with the level of detail. Atarumaster88
- Can't complain about the level of detail you've put there. Any way we can get the same sort of expansion for the summary of Assault at Selonia? Also, the "Battle of Bakura" section is now disproportionately long compared to the other sections. Any way you can split up that huge block of text into smaller sections? It would definitely help the layout. Cull Tremayne 04:22, 8 September 2008 (UTC)
