Etro Edthatt

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  • Etro Edthatt
    • Biography could use subsectioning
    • Possibly a small intro expansion? It just looks a little short in comparison to the size of the Bio.
    • There is an unusual amount of content in the article being referenced to unrelated source material, much of which appears unnecessary or just inappropriate. Just going down the list of references:
      • The character's eye color and lack of hair are being sourced to Galaxy Guide 4. The character is not mentioned in that book, of course. Moreover, if Duros have no hair by default, it's unnecessary to say that a Duros is hairless.
      • Same issue with the skin color, which strangely is being sourced to Ultimate Alien Anthology, which also does not mention this character.
      • Both of the TCW references are just completely unnecessary, as are the portions they're referencing. This article doesn't need to give physical details on the species characters of the Duros.
      • How is Paradise Snare necessary in that sentence for reference 8? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 21:30, September 14, 2019 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

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