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Danni Quee
Things to do
Date citations need to be checked.Bts sourcing.Image formatting issues in Oasis.Linking needs to be checked.Publication years in Bts.Image captions could be improved.Canceled media should not be listed in non-canon appearances.- I have tried to resolve those issues to some extent. However, I have to be honest here, the article has many other issues in addition to those listed. The level of detail and context is severely lacking, with many important events being simply glanced over. As a result, the whole article basically feels like an abridged retelling of the novels instead of a detailed biography of the character. The tone of the prose is also fairly unencyclopedic and colloquial throughout. The article also refers to many battles of the war, but I'm not sure that those battles have ever been referred to by those names in official sources. This needs to be checked as well. QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 11:42, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
- I have tried to resolve those issues to some extent. However, I have to be honest here, the article has many other issues in addition to those listed. The level of detail and context is severely lacking, with many important events being simply glanced over. As a result, the whole article basically feels like an abridged retelling of the novels instead of a detailed biography of the character. The tone of the prose is also fairly unencyclopedic and colloquial throughout. The article also refers to many battles of the war, but I'm not sure that those battles have ever been referred to by those names in official sources. This needs to be checked as well. QuiGonJinn
- The article needs to provide more detail and context.
- The article should be written in a more encyclopedic fashion.
- The referencing for the battle names needs to be checked.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 19:16, April 22, 2018 (UTC)
Removal of FA status
- Article put on probation at Meeting 89. 1358 (Talk) 17:24, March 25, 2018 (UTC)
- Probation extended at Meeting 90. Exiled Jedi (talk) 19:16, April 22, 2018 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 91. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:47, June 6, 2018 (UTC)