Carth Onasi

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  1. Cull Tremayne 11:20, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
  2. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 03:37, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
  3. .... 23:41, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
  4. --Eyrezer 02:35, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
  5. Lord Hydronium 06:13, 21 April 2007 (UTC)

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  • Well sourced. Perhaps more expansion and better sectioning in the Jedi Civil War section, but still a good article. Cull Tremayne 11:20, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
  • He looks grumpy and just plain . . . off in the infobox pic. It really needs a different one. Havac 22:32, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
    • The grumpy expression was done on purpose and I actually can't do anything about it - it's one of his idle expressions. As for...off. Please go into detail. I can't have it fixed unless I know exactly what's wrong with it. --RedemptionRedemptionusersymbolTalk 22:36, 29 March 2007 (UTC)
      • Well, it just doesn't look like Carth. Something about the angle makes his jaw look funny, I think. A different idle expression or something would probably help it, but it just makes him look kind of chunky and pissed-off. His eyes are all beady too. A different expression and/or angle would probably help, but as it is is just doesn't look like the Carth that I stared at for sixty hours of gameplay. Havac 00:18, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
        • Is this one any better? He does look pretty grumpy when idle... Sarendipity Talk File:Atrissig.jpg 03:03, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
          • Well, he looks a little dopey, but it is better. I'd take it over the first one. Havac 05:46, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
            • Sorry, but I can't see anything wrong with the current one. I simply can't see what you see. And I'll be damned before I let dopey expressions inside of an infobox over a stern expression. Dopey, lazy eye or stern. And just in case you forgot, Carth is always a bit ticked off at the player for one reason or another...well. Unless the player is female but seeing how that's not the case...--RedemptionRedemptionusersymbolTalk 03:45, 31 March 2007 (UTC)
  • Needs those fact tags to be adressed. .... 23:04, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

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  • It seems a bit short to me, but I haven't played the game. Is the article complete? --Eyrezer 12:41, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
    • I tried to expand the Jedi Civil War section, and I hope it meets with your approval. -Solus (Bird of Prey) 19:51, 25 March 2007 (UTC)
      • Nice work. --Eyrezer 23:45, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
  • My completely unofficial rant: the KOTOR games are vast in terms of gameplay and the amount of text (dialog.tlk files are about 9 MB long), so I'd prefer KOTOR and TSL articles to reference individual scenes from the game like it's done in the Jedi Exile articles. For the sake of verifiability. End rant. - Sikon 05:39, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
    • Wouldn't that be a bit like asking people to reference chapters or pages for novels? Sarendipity Talk File:Atrissig.jpg 06:00, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
      • Your point being? Let them reference chapters or pages if they can. - Sikon 06:16, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
        • It just seems a bit much to ask... so many articles are not referenced at all, and I hadn't seen anything like that until you pointed it out on the Jedi Exile article. Sarendipity Talk File:Atrissig.jpg 06:30, 30 March 2007 (UTC)