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- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 03:25, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 01:28, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Subject-relevant image of Jade Shadow (or something else relevant) can be tucked in.
- Pronouns/gender update.
- Equipment to be sectioned out from the PT regarding the backpack/cables/baton still in there.
- Fact tag to be solved (PT isnt cited).
- TERC reference to be turned into a proper note to state 'TERC dates [novel's] events to...'
- I see the first 43 ABY referenced, but not the second one used. If the novel itself doesn't support that then that'll need a ref too.
- The language thing seems better off in PT rather than equipment.
- Fix audiobook linking in appearances.
- 'briefly as a minor character' --> Some minor BtS cleanup.—spookywillowwtalk 03:25, 13 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 19:28, 13 May 2024 (UTC)