Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Unidentified Human Imperial Knight (sparring session)

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 00:52, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 00:52, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

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Unidentified Human Imperial Knight (sparring session)

Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- Added pronouns. Loki-Is-Cool 14:59, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
  - Is the character actually referred to as a female or is that based off appearance? Lewisr (talk) 20:54, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
    - Not so sure if she is actually reffered to as female (I never read the Legacy comics ngl), but in a TheForce.net interview the writer of the comic issue she debuted in addressed her with she/her pronouns, but because gender doesn't mean pronouns perhaps it is best to remove her gender. Loki-Is-Cool 08:03, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
Agamar in the intro could use context, Had Abbadon and Korriban in the body could use context.
- Added context (plus some for Bastion). Loki-Is-Cool 14:59, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
The image currently in the powers/abilities section would be better served in the biography.
- Done. Loki-Is-Cool 11:37, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Hair and eye color should be mentioned in a personality/traits section along with anything else of note.
- Added section. Loki-Is-Cool 14:59, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
Some of the powers/abilities section looks to be more relevant for an equipment section.
- Separated segments. Loki-Is-Cool 14:59, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
The BTS can be cleaned up to remove 'She was not identified as an Imperial Knight until her next appearance' and just mention the comments from Duursema instead. Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
- Removed it. Loki-Is-Cool 14:59, 10 August 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 29 July 2024 (UTC)