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Ssssk!

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 05:32, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 18:41, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update, as well as the family fields clearing out.
  • Needs a thoroughly good copy-edit to bring upto the modern standards.
    • Taken a pass through but let me know if there was anything else you were looking for. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:08, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
  • There's some NPOV wording which needs to be changed.
    • Reworded the parts on the pain being caused, but if this was refering to something else then let me know. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:08, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The paragraphs could be broken up and the biography sectioned.
  • The image on the side of the image needs to be removed.
  • Could use another image in the body.
  • Equipment section, possibly a skills/abilities if anything applicable.
  • BTS needs to be cleaned up. Lewisr (talk) 05:32, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Per Mystra, could 'A feline species' be noted in the infobox's species field?—spookywillowwtalk 03:49, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Added just Feline in order to match the Mystra precedent. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:54, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Good status

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 17:49, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 17:49, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 18:38, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status