Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Mushkil

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 03:27, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 00:25, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

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Mushkil

Pronouns/gender update.
Those paragraphs are larger than ideal in the modern skin. I'd like to see them rearranged into 4-5 and then into two subsections.
This is an old enough nom that a cursory check for missing equipment (even if clothes) should be checked for, as I see he used a knife at least, and also for additional skills info (to be taken out of the PT or added to).
If the character themselves doesn't appear in the essential guide used to cite species, a manual ref note is needed explaining that that guide identified the species that Mushkil was described as in [whatever other source].—spookywilloww^talk 03:27, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:00, 25 July 2024 (UTC)