Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Lod

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 04:01, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 16:16, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Lod

132 words in body, to be desectioned.
Death field to be merged into one reference per modernization. Also, the 1000 BBY isn't mentioned in the body.
"Slave" --> "enslavement" change.
Pronouns/gender/family fields update, including first-usage cites per recently-passed policy.
Can the skin color not be determined off the image?
Seeing a pronoun pipelinked.
PT seems like duplicate info to the body in honesty; the response already being documented.
BtS: Comic release date needed; trade paperback information not needed.
If what he's wearing is a headset, counts as equipment.—spookywilloww^talk 04:02, 5 December 2023 (UTC)

Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 00:00, 5 January 2024 (UTC)

Wordcount / this would be a CA once all the issues get ironed out due to dupe info anyway.—spookywilloww^talk 15:48, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 15:49, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
OOM 224 (he/him) 15:51, 24 January 2024 (UTC)