Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Lari Oll

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  • 1 Lari Oll
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Good status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Good status

Lari Oll

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 00:48, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update.
    • Done. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:58, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Body could use a subject relevant image.
    • Added. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:58, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
  • I think it should made more clear at first mention of the Jedi Temple that it's located on Coruscant.
    • Added. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:58, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Some of the personality/traits section seems more suitable in a powers/abilities section.
    • Split. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:58, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Is there anything to be noted in an equipment section? Lewisr (talk) 00:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Nothing. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 16:58, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:03, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:06, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:08, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:48, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status