Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Jerjerrod (admiral)

Requested By: Imperators II
Date Requested: 09:58, 14 March 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 01:20, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that passed review. Please do not modify it.

Jerjerrod (admiral)

Outstanding issues from Wookieepedia:AC/Jerjerrod (admiral) (comments from a user who addressed the other issues copied over below):
- Use {{StarshipsVehiclesCite}} for magazine.
  - Done. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:56, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
Pronouns update, while this is here.—spookywilloww^talk 18:07, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:41, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
Bit of an image cluster there. Gonna recommend removing one of them. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:58, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- Removed one.—spookywilloww^talk 01:18, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

I've added context for Erigorm, but unfortunately I don't have a copy of the magazine to confirm the section. I've also added back some removed items, with tweaks. The BtS image only fits on the right, so I put the removed image back in to keep the right/left alternation, and it should be out of the way of the quote now. I also put the general ISB reference back into the BtS, and moved the story-specific ref earlier, because the latter half of that sentence uses information from outside that one section. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:14, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Marked for probation per 2nd round unaddressed objection from 26th.—spookywilloww^talk 14:24, 26 May 2023 (UTC)