Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Jaron Kyte

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  • 1 Jaron Kyte
    • 1.1 Object
    • 1.2 Comments
    • 1.3 Vote to retain Good status
    • 1.4 Vote to strip Good status

Jaron Kyte

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 03:55, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 01:33, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Pronouns/gender update.
  • The three paragraphs can be de-chunkified and split up a bit. I imagine the optimal length under modern standard will see it with two subsections and smaller paragraphs.
  • Once above is done, there'll be room for other subject-relevant image(s).
  • Could use a decent copy-edit to abide by modern MOS linking and just general cleanup.
  • Some of the PT would be suitable to be a skills section instead.—spookywillowwtalk 03:55, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed Panther436 RedNihilEye (talk) 00:37, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:07, 18 April 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Good status

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:17, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 01:19, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:32, 15 May 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status