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Jaron Kyte
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 03:55, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 01:33, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Pronouns/gender update.
- The three paragraphs can be de-chunkified and split up a bit. I imagine the optimal length under modern standard will see it with two subsections and smaller paragraphs.
- Once above is done, there'll be room for other subject-relevant image(s).
- Could use a decent copy-edit to abide by modern MOS linking and just general cleanup.
- Some of the PT would be suitable to be a skills section instead.—spookywillowwtalk 03:55, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
- Addressed Panther436
(talk) 00:37, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
- Addressed Panther436
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:07, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
Vote to retain Good status
—spookywillowwtalk 01:17, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 01:19, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 01:32, 15 May 2024 (UTC)