- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that passed review. Please do not modify it.
Imperial Symphony Orchestra
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 18:32, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 18:31, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
Object
BtS sourcing needed, though last sentence of that section is unneded.- {{CSWECite}} to be implemented.
- A relevant image can be added, maybe one of Gaeriel.
- May need a date note for 15 BBY/5 BBY to equate the quote's usage to the BBY/ABY calendar system (probably New Essential Chronology or something).
Any way to maybe knock a sentence's worth off the intro? Seems a touch long for an article of this size, though only a slight trim needed.—spookywillowwtalk 18:32, 10 December 2023 (UTC)- All addressed. Ended up adding a date note ref in the quotes, but I don't know if that's proper and and am wondering if the dates should just be removed from the attributions. I'm also not sure if the second sentence of the Bts is really needed either. Panther436 (talk) 03:08, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
- Correct on both counts, trimmed it from quote and also merged the refs into one since they had the same base, after conferring with other ACs. Also took out that second BtS sentence as well.—spookywillowwtalk 03:03, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- All addressed. Ended up adding a date note ref in the quotes, but I don't know if that's proper and and am wondering if the dates should just be removed from the attributions. I'm also not sure if the second sentence of the Bts is really needed either. Panther436 (talk) 03:08, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to retain Good status
Thanks for saving.—spookywillowwtalk 03:05, 13 January 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 03:05, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
- OOM 224 (he/him) 18:29, 13 January 2024 (UTC)