Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Hakagram Graush

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 00:19, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 04:22, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Hakagram Graush

1002 words.
Pronouns/gender/family fields.
Date note can solve the infobox death field date double-referencing.
Clothing and equipment colors can be noted.
Some of this needs to be properly reviewed for both accuracy and formatting issues (eyeing those commas on the outside of the citations in the BtS).
BtS: "In the twenty-ninth issue of the Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic series of comics, a horned helmet known as the Helm of Dathka Graush was shown.The design of this helmet is similar to the one Hakagram Graush wore in Star Wars: Tales of the Jedi."—Unless a SW author has made or commented on this, it falls under original research.
BtS: Full comic release date needed for the second issue of Tales of the Jedi.
BtS: Book of Sith to be contextualized as a reference book/work.—spookywilloww^talk 00:19, 9 January 2024 (UTC)

Per word count (which it's already over 1000) but also with the stuff above + other general cleanup like adding more bits and bobs to the equipment, a short skills section, and etc etc. this is going up and not down, so.—spookywilloww^talk 03:59, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 03:59, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 04:22, 26 January 2024 (UTC)