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Christo/Legends
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 03:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 20:20, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
Object
Pronouns/gender/family fields + first-usage pronoun refs as needed.- Play-by-play of article and PT to be trimmed down; mentions far too much direct dialogue.
- Those bio paragraphs look chunky. Would like to see them rearranged into four paragraphs total instead of three to allow for two subsections, and for the current image to be enlarged. Another image can fit in the other subsection, along with a quote if available.
Some of that apartment stuff can be Equipment sectioned, along with clothing and etc.- Addressed Panther436 (talk) 19:02, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
Theres—honestly gotta be a way to not need a Tweet to cite that bit of IU info pointing to it, given it happens in another episode.—spookywillowwtalk 03:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC)- Despite what the tweet says, "Senate Murders" does not actually mention Burtoni's bill and it actually passing and only features a resolution against the expansion of the clone army Burtoni's arguing for failing. And "Pursuit of Peace" doesn't actually say if it passed, and honestly implies that it fails. A few other articles cite the tweet too. Panther436 (talk) 19:02, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
- In that case if it's left there is it possible to reference the first half of the sentence to the ep and only the latter half to the tweet? It still seems like a suboptimal use of a double ref.—spookywillowwtalk 18:00, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
- Split Panther436 (talk) 21:34, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
- In that case if it's left there is it possible to reference the first half of the sentence to the ep and only the latter half to the tweet? It still seems like a suboptimal use of a double ref.—spookywillowwtalk 18:00, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
- Despite what the tweet says, "Senate Murders" does not actually mention Burtoni's bill and it actually passing and only features a resolution against the expansion of the clone army Burtoni's arguing for failing. And "Pursuit of Peace" doesn't actually say if it passed, and honestly implies that it fails. A few other articles cite the tweet too. Panther436 (talk) 19:02, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
Kamino needs context in the biography.- Added Panther436 (talk) 21:34, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
Per precedent the episode guide citations will need to point to the individual story gallery slides.—spookywillowwtalk 18:00, 28 January 2024 (UTC)- Addressed Panther436 (talk) 21:34, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to retain Good status
Thanks for saving.—spookywillowwtalk 19:44, 29 January 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 19:44, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
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