Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Alysun Celz

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Alysun Celz

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 03:43, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 02:27, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Pronouns/gender/family fields + first-usage pronoun refs as needed.
  • Those images seem like they can be enlarged. I'd like to see that super small one in the PT moved up to the bio; it's too small to support one down there. There's also a small line on the top of the first biography image that could be cropped out.
  • Needs equipment section.
  • "…was also capable of wielding a blaster." seems more like skills info rather than PT.
  • Comic citation template that's used in appearances should be used in the refs.
  • BtS to be cleaned up to modern standard.
  • Would do well with an overall copy-edit, since it's a bit of an older article.—spookywillowwtalk 03:43, 14 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 01:13, 14 February 2024 (UTC)

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  1. ACvote Two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:12, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:15, 14 March 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 02:25, 14 March 2024 (UTC)