Wookieepedia:Good article reviews/Adascopolis

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Adascopolis

• Requested By: —spookywilloww^talk
• Date Requested: 15:29, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
• Date Archived: 08:14, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

• Image tagged for over a month: can use more images of the city itself or relevant individuals from the same comic.
• I think the introduction would look cleaner if split in two paragraphs.
• The comic's main page has the date cited to an author post; just want to confirm that same citation doesn't need to be used here as well.—spookywilloww^talk 15:29, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
  • All addressed. The comic does date itself but both it and the post say it was "approximately" that year so I've modified it accordingly. Panther436 (talk) 05:36, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
• Comic illustrator needed Lewisr (talk) 07:00, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added Panther436 (talk) 17:43, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
• The Adascopolis Financial Exchange linked in the points of interest in the infobox field seems to be a company, not a location.
  • The Exchange is said to have been "constructed" which to me sounds like it's a place in the way that like the New York Stock Exchange is both a place and a service Panther436 (talk) 02:12, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
• I'm also wondering if any of the other locations should be added to points of interest, like the spaceport, bioengineering facilities, medical facility. Haven't read the comic but noticed these in the locations subsection.—spookywilloww^talk 23:41, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added the medical facility, but the spaceport is just ostensibly one, it's not referred to directly. And someone just says that they should "visit our bioengineering facilities" which isn't very specific. Panther436 (talk) 02:12, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Fair enough.—spookywilloww^talk 18:48, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
• The page should note Adascopolis' mention in the two IU things in relation The Admiral's List: Karath Home Safely and Adascorp Fiscal Period Financial Report and Outlook: Message from the Chief Executive. I found links to them here if you weren't able to get ahold of them Lewisr (talk) 02:37, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Added, but do you think those reports need separate IU articles? And should the current articles be linked if not? Panther436 (talk) 04:57, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Hmm yeah they probably should have their own IU articles Lewisr (talk) 07:06, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Created and linked Panther436 (talk) 04:38, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to retain Good status

1. Thanks to Panther for handling the above Lewisr (talk) 04:42, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 04:43, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 (he/him) 08:13, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Good status