- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Zodu Onglo
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A friend for my other Pau'an criminal.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Fan26 (Talk) 15:10, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
Objections handled via IRC. 
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:02, July 27, 2019 (UTC)- Tommy
Macaroni 18:16, July 27, 2019 (UTC) - QuiGonJinn (Talk) 09:57, August 1, 2019 (UTC)
- Nice work. MasterFred(Whatever) 02:26, August 7, 2019 (UTC)
Object
Fan
I think New Republic Era should be pipelinked to in "reign", at the end of the second paragraph in the bio. Fan26 (Talk) 13:59, July 26, 2019 (UTC)- Done, although in future you can be bold and just add links like this yourself. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
That sentence is currently most of the Bio's second paragraph, I'm thinking it should be broken up. Fan26 (Talk) 15:06, July 26, 2019 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:08, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
Tommy
You should probably mention his ear covers you can see in the picture. I think you'd be able to use a reference book explaining Pau'ans' sensitive hearing and the need for those things.Tommy Macaroni 19:53, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
- Neat, I didn't even know there was a reason for those. How's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:52, July 27, 2019 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
A couple quick things. I think his age and the date should be swapped at the start of the second sentence in his biography. It would flow better and also allow you to remove a ref.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:28, August 6, 2019 (UTC)
The last sentence of the Bts is redundant in stating both the date and "earlier that year."MasterFred(Whatever) 21:46, August 5, 2019 (UTC)
- I'm not seeing how it's redundant, I specify the day and month then the earlier this year specifies the year. Which part is redundant? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:28, August 6, 2019 (UTC)
- It just reads weird to me, but it's not a hill I'm willing to die on. MasterFred(Whatever) 02:26, August 7, 2019 (UTC)
- It just reads weird to me, but it's not a hill I'm willing to die on. MasterFred
- I'm not seeing how it's redundant, I specify the day and month then the earlier this year specifies the year. Which part is redundant? Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:28, August 6, 2019 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:26, August 7, 2019 (UTC)