Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zinn Toa/Legends

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Zinn Toa

• Nominated by: Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 08:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Hey baby.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 19:12, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
2. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:52, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
3. --Xd1358 ^Talk 17:58, December 21, 2009 (UTC)
4. Creepy looking kid. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 19:18, December 21, 2009 (UTC)
5. Kreivi Wolter 20:39, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. The Grand Master
   • "Skywalker could still sense Toa's presence, however, prompting the droids to attack the Jedi while brandishing the infants as shields." How did Skywalker's ability to sense Toa prompt the droids to attack them? This doesn't really make sense.
     • Please check your grammar here.
       • Wow that looked dumb. How's it now?
         • Eh, try again: "Skywalker could still sense Toa's presence, but before the he could continue searching, the droids to attack the Jedi while brandishing the infants as shields."
           • I should probably pay more attention when I do stuff like this. Give it another try haha.
   • Is there enough info to make a stub for Sidious' secondary facility? Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:11, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
     • Your first objection has been fixed I hope. As for the second, I would say no. If you feel it's necesary, then I'm more than willing to make an article, but at the moment, we don't know what it was or even where it was. The only known info is the era and affiliation. Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 23:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
       • That's fine, no problem. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 00:19, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
2. One small thing: is there any reason you attribute the quote to two individuals when it appears that only one person is speaking (Sidious, I assume)? Real minor, but I'd like to see it changed. Otherwise, fine work. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
   • My apologies, I had copied and pasted that quote from a different article and edited out the droid's lines. It's fixed now. Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 03:31, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:25, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

• I'm working on getting some body images - as for the infobox, that's the best you're going to get. Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 09:00, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
  • I've added a couple images to the body of the article, as requested. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 17:39, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
    • Many thanks, JMAS. Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 23:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)