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Zhari Vaal
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:01, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe. Owner of one of the most hilarious causes of death in the SW universe.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Yeah don't beat your horses, people. graestan(talk) 04:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 20:07, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:02, February 7, 2012 (UTC)
—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 00:32, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
- Ctrl+F like a boss, then these should all be totally perfect. —NAYAYEN 01:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
- Plagueis327 16:23, February 9, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Nayayen boldly gets in just before it nearly passes
Could there be some note of the fact that Izri "had eulogized Zhari"?- Addressed.
Apparently Korsin was mistaken for Zhari by Adari when she ran from the bonfire (admittedly, distressed at the time), which could be interpretted as them looking similar.- Eh, it's kinda weak. They have similar builds, but she only confuses Korsin for Zhari after a traumatic experience in which her eyes were unfocused.
On page 18 of Skyborn, he (Adari's husband) is described as short and stocky, info which is missing from the article.- Bah. Addressed.
- I found these objections simply by searching Skyborn for "Zhari" and "husband" with Ctrl+F. I don't know if you do this when writing the articles or not, but be sure to check all matches for relevant info. —NAYAYEN 01:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:29, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:08, February 9, 2012 (UTC)