Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zhari Vaal

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Zhari Vaal

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:01, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: FloydProject: Lost Tribe. Owner of one of the most hilarious causes of death in the SW universe.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Yeah don't beat your horses, people. graestan(talk) 04:42, February 3, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:07, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:02, February 7, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 00:32, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Ctrl+F like a boss, then these should all be totally perfect. —NAYAYEN 01:35, February 8, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Plagueis327 16:23, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Nayayen boldly gets in just before it nearly passes
  • Could there be some note of the fact that Izri "had eulogized Zhari"?
    • Addressed.
  • Apparently Korsin was mistaken for Zhari by Adari when she ran from the bonfire (admittedly, distressed at the time), which could be interpretted as them looking similar.
    • Eh, it's kinda weak. They have similar builds, but she only confuses Korsin for Zhari after a traumatic experience in which her eyes were unfocused.
  • On page 18 of Skyborn, he (Adari's husband) is described as short and stocky, info which is missing from the article.
    • Bah. Addressed.
  • I found these objections simply by searching Skyborn for "Zhari" and "husband" with Ctrl+F. I don't know if you do this when writing the articles or not, but be sure to check all matches for relevant info. —NAYAYEN 01:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:08, February 9, 2012 (UTC)