Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Zersium rifle

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Zersium rifle

Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:35, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments: One of the few weapons in KOTOR II that I would put away my lightsaber for when I found it.

IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 05:52, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 13:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good <- Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 14:57, August 16, 2011 (UTC)
MasterFred^(Whatever) 17:59, August 18, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good. Just make sure that the change I made on the first sentence of the history section is correct. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:35, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
Talrrivanian ^{(Headquarters)}
--Eyrezer 04:48, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

~~Please remember to pipelink to color or the actual color. For instance, at one point in the Description section, you pipelink "red" to color, and then you directly link silver.~~
- Oops, fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:31, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
"Human-sized species needed two hands to operate the weapon, which was capable of receiving additional upgrades." Could you elaborate more on the upgrades the rifle could receive? Were they different from any other weapons in the game?
- How is this?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:31, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
Otherwise, nice job EJ. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 12:00, August 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:31, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

~~Just one. I believe you need to reword the last sentence in "History." Either that or I keep misreading it.~~ Otherwise, well done. Much improvement since I saw your work back in spring. :) MasterFred^(Whatever) 16:46, August 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Is it any better now? Nice to see you again, MasterFred.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:53, August 18, 2011 (UTC)
  - Thanks. :) And yes, that's much better. MasterFred^(Whatever) 17:59, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

~~You can't ref the entire Description section to just the one ref.~~ Other than that, great article EJ.--Talrrivanian ^{(Headquarters)} 17:13, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
- Umm, I am a little confused here. Why can't I reference the entire Description section using just one reference? It's all in one paragraph and everything in the paragraph is from KOTOR II. Please explain.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:44, August 19, 2011 (UTC)
  - Sorry to butt in, but EJ is allowed to use a single ref for that entire section per his above reasons. MasterFred^(Whatever) 18:12, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

I removed the image with Atton Rand holding the weapon because it is not guaranteed that he will ever possess the weapon.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:35, August 11, 2011 (UTC)