- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Zellos
- Nominated by: Darth Trayus
(Trayus Academy) 09:43, December 26, 2009 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 09:46, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
- --Xd1358 Talk 09:14, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 00:13, January 11, 2010 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:29, January 20, 2010 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 04:18, January 20, 2010 (UTC)
Object
After the Imperial capture of the Seswenna sector, the Emperor turned his sights towards the Mid Rim. Is the capture of Seswenna so important that it should be mentioned in the article?--Xd1358 Talk 09:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)- Yes, it's the final action in the Outer Rim before the move into the Mid Rim. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 22:04, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
"Despite massive Imperial advantages, the planet's Republic defenders were able to inflict considerable damage to the Sith strike force." What advantages? More soldiers, weather, luck?--Xd1358 Talk 08:36, January 2, 2010 (UTC)- I don't think I really need to expand on this in the intro—the intent of the intro is to give the reader a short summary of the article. For details, you read into the biography. The essential information is in the intro already. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
"With Imperial warships from across the galaxy at his command, the Grand Moff once again invaded Bothan Space" This implies that Zellos also was present during the first invasion; if this isn't true, then it needs to be reworded accordingly.Good work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 17:39, January 10, 2010 (UTC)- Woops. It's been fixed. Thanks for the review! Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 22:21, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
- Toprawa's Not-Really Objections:
- Real minor and not an objection, but please be aware that "Old Republic" isn't an era article in the infobox. "Old Republic era" is. I've fixed this for you.
- If this SW:TOR external link is an official LucasArts website (which it is), it belongs in the Sources list, per WP:LG#Sources. I've fixed this for you as well, but something to keep in mind. Also, I'm not sure if we have a citation tag for this sort of thing, but please check and use if so. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:29, January 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for fixing both of these careless and silly mistakes on my part. I'll look for the citation tag, but I don't think we have one. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 03:42, January 20, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:18, January 20, 2010 (UTC)