- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Zandor Rocker
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Support
- —DarthtylerTalk 16:17, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
Two of the Images need to be sourced. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 16:24, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- Done.—DarthtylerTalk 16:30, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
2(b) - sources? There's not even a sources section. --School of Thrawn 101 08:47, 7 August 2007 (UTC)- But there is an appearances section which is the only place these guys have appeared. --Eyrezer 00:36, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- Subtle difference between the two, however. Either way, it's a simple fix, in this case, since the two sections mirror e/o...I've taken care of it. --School of Thrawn 101 05:43, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- It was right the way it was. As Zandor Rockers don't appear in the threee sources you added, the correct place for them is in the Notes and references section only. The Appearances and Sources section are only for appeaences and mentions of the subject of the article. Appearances are for in-universe material and Sources for OOU material. --Eyrezer 08:17, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- You're right. Thanks for the lesson and the revert. Either way, consider my objection null and void. --School of Thrawn 101 08:19, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- It was right the way it was. As Zandor Rockers don't appear in the threee sources you added, the correct place for them is in the Notes and references section only. The Appearances and Sources section are only for appeaences and mentions of the subject of the article. Appearances are for in-universe material and Sources for OOU material. --Eyrezer 08:17, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- Subtle difference between the two, however. Either way, it's a simple fix, in this case, since the two sections mirror e/o...I've taken care of it. --School of Thrawn 101 05:43, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- But there is an appearances section which is the only place these guys have appeared. --Eyrezer 00:36, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
- Speculation, repetitively redundant, and the prose isn't the best. For example, half of "The Gantu incident" isn't about Rockers, and/or is repeated in later sections. —Xwing328(Talk) 04:51, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
Comments
- I know much of it falls under one source, but the referencing is too sparse. Each paragraphs should include at least one reference.
TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 16:36, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- AdmirableAckbar is correct: all the information needs to be sourced...either each paragraph, or each piece of information. Greyman(Paratus) 16:41, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- So every paragraph in the article needs to be sourced? That sucks.—DarthtylerTalk 16:50, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- Done.—DarthtylerTalk 16:52, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- So every paragraph in the article needs to be sourced? That sucks.—DarthtylerTalk 16:50, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- AdmirableAckbar is correct: all the information needs to be sourced...either each paragraph, or each piece of information. Greyman(Paratus) 16:41, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
Reference in intro needs to be removed.
TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 16:54, 27 July 2007 (UTC)they also had a variety of types, such as many were fat, small, or skinnyshould be rephrased
TheOne&OnlyAdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 16:56, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- Okay.—DarthtylerTalk 16:57, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- Done.—DarthtylerTalk 16:59, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- Okay.—DarthtylerTalk 16:57, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- I'm excited to see this nominated here! I've liked these guys for a while and so I'm glad someone has given them the attention they deserve. Nice Going. Having said that, the infobox image needs to be rescanned before I can support.--Eyrezer 05:10, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- I can't tell if someone's being sarcastic, so if you are, I'm sorry if I'm a bad writer. Second, my scanner isn't working. But thank you if its not sarcasm. —DarthtylerTalk 00:52, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Eyrezer wasn't being sarcastic. So don't worry :) Greyman(Paratus) 02:29, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Okay good. I hate sarcasm, though sometimes its a powerful weapon.—DarthtylerTalk 02:32, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Fixed the main image. -- Ozzel 07:17, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
- Okay good. I hate sarcasm, though sometimes its a powerful weapon.—DarthtylerTalk 02:32, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- Eyrezer wasn't being sarcastic. So don't worry :) Greyman(Paratus) 02:29, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- I can't tell if someone's being sarcastic, so if you are, I'm sorry if I'm a bad writer. Second, my scanner isn't working. But thank you if its not sarcasm. —DarthtylerTalk 00:52, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- The bit about not being able to smell, is that stated or speculation? --Eyrezer 05:18, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- The bit with the nectar needs to be cleaned up. It doesn't make sense currently. --Eyrezer 05:31, 28 July 2007 (UTC)