Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Yeep (second nomination)

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Yeep

• Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:58, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another former GAN cleaning up at the races!
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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:31, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
2. Samonic (Talk) 09:21, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Always a pleasure to see former status articles brought back, particularly when I myself reviewed the original GAN back in 2012. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:28, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
4. Forgot I started this review. Love the BFE reference. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:58, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:58, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• The article is Legends, but the BTS says canon.
  • Hangover from before the split, fixed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
• You reference the fact that it contained an image to the credits, which I don't think is correct.
  • It's correct, Corroney is credited for images Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Yeah, but it doesn't specify that this particular issue of HNN contained an image. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:50, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
      • I really don't think that it's necessary to specify that the issue had an image or not. The fact it did have an image, and Corroney did the images for HNN, is sufficient. If it didn't have an image, we wouldn't mention Corroney at all. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
• A few links are missing, such as Diet/Legends and Galactic Standard Calendar.
  • Got those in a copy-edit. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:57, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
• "After winning the Mobquet race, he mistook his medal for food and placed it inside his mouth" it does not really sound like a P&T to me. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:05, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
  • I think it's relevant as it speaks to either his intelligence or personality Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
    • The connection should be made clearer then, because it sounds like a biography fact placed in P&T. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:50, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
      • I've reworded but am hesitant to be too explicit on whether he put the food in his mouth intentionally (personality trait) or in error (intelligence). If you've any suggestions I'd love to use them! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
• "that it referred to the stowaway's species or perhaps his chest." this sentence sounds a bit weird to me. What would you say about something like: "what "Yeep" meant and considered the possibility that it referred to the stowaway's species or that it was a word for his chest." ?
  • I would say "That sentence seemed weird to me too but I think this is a much better alternative, thanks LucaRoR!" :P Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:32, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
• I don't think you need the ref to say "in that year." LucaRoR ^(Talk) 20:17, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed the reference Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:32, 24 February 2022 (UTC)

Samonic

• There are multiple links missing in the intro and P+T. Everything that can be linked should be linked at the first mention. An example is Eye/Legends. Otherwise, good job. Samonic (talk) 11:12, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I hate these and have linked them despite my rage lol Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
    • That's nice. Samonic (Ah, yes. The negotiator.) 18:48, 1 February 2022 (UTC)

Did someone say Teek?

• Full release date needed for HNN. It can be found here. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:57, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. Teekle Teekle! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
• Quote sources should be switched to the archive urls from the Wayback Machine. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:56, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
  • I linked to HoloNet News Vol. 531 52 as this is convention for other sources. I'll be confused if you want the url, so just let me know why and I'll change it if that's what you need :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:07, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
    • There does seem to be precedent going both ways (url vs wikilink), but I think it's nice for the reader to easily be able to see the source of the quote, which is something that we can do with web sources like HNN but not other publications.
      • Updated, but this may be relevant to the similar Discord discussion regarding linking to wikipedia... Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
        • I'd say linking to sources is different than linking to another wiki, but I see what you mean.
• A little more detail on the IU HoloNet News report would be appreciated. See Delemede as an example. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:45, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
  • How's that? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
• (Review note) This is not how a semicolon is used. I fixed it for you here. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:25, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Thanks, no idea why I did that :/ Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:22, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• I think you can mention that he posed with Pumav and Yopaxtul and that Pumav was one of the racers he beat. Worth mentioning that Pumav came seventh specifically as it shows that Yeep beat atleast six other racers. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:00, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Good call, added both Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:30, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
  • I felt that the slight expansion warranted an image, so added Pumav. Feel free to remove if you disagree Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:34, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
    • I feel like using the whole image of all three of them would be better given the one word width caption on the current image. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:07, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Agree it looked poor with that caption, I've changed it to Yopaxtul as a slightly wider image. I really don't want to use the wider shot of all three of them as it is so similar to the infobox image. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:58, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:58, 11 April 2022 (UTC)