- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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Yarr Gatonne
- Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:05, July 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I can be bored sometimes, can't I?
(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
--Eyrezer 04:45, July 26, 2010 (UTC)
Need I reiterate? Skippy never disappoints.—Tommy 9281 17:22, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
Grunny (talk) 03:07, July 31, 2010 (UTC)- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 06:44, July 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Looks great, good job!DarthRage(User talk:DarthRage)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 17:48, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Chack
The sentence about his cybernetic eye in the intro doesn't flow with the one after it; it just seems stuck in there.Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:47, July 28, 2010 (UTC)- Better? --Skippy Farlstendoiro 19:52, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
Grunny
Missing ref for "Rebellion era" in the infobox, and I wasn't sure which of the two sources to go with as I don't have them handy.- D'oh! Added. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 18:32, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
"Gatonne was considered to be calm, sophisticated, and with a forceful presence." – does the source specify who considered him to be calm, sophisticated, with a forceful presence, specifying whose point of view this opinion came from?Grunny (talk) 09:30, July 30, 2010 (UTC)- In fact, the omniscient narrator says Gatonne was calm. Thus, he "was" calm, not "was considered" calm. Changed. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 18:32, July 30, 2010 (UTC)
Cav
Last paragraph of biography is currently unsourced.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:54, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Typo. Solved. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:23, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:49, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Hey Skip, I hope you don't mind that I moved the P&T image to the other side, only because it was displacing the section headings while on the left. If unacceptable you deem, feel free to move it back.—Tommy 9281 17:22, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
- It's cool with me. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 17:23, July 29, 2010 (UTC)