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Yarael Poof

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:46, October 13, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The first entry in my canon Quermian trilogy of nominations.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Great to see someone working on these Canon articles! --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 02:39, October 16, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:15, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 00:05, October 30, 2015 (UTC)
  4. VDO talk 03:11, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 19:07, February 14, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Good stuff. Just remember to avoid using first names when possible. IFYLOFD (Talk) 00:58, May 29, 2016 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:49, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Clones
  • While I'm not sure how necessary it is, but is there an artist credit for the piece of concept art in the BtS? If so, I imagine it could either go into the BtS or work as a part of the image's caption. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:20, October 13, 2015 (UTC)
    • I wasn't able to find it on Poof's original Databank entry, so I suspect it's from a previous version that isn't archived. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 23:32, October 13, 2015 (UTC)
      • Ah, I see. In that case, it may not be amiss to just include the fact that the piece identified Poof simply as "Alien Jedi." --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 05:15, October 14, 2015 (UTC)
        • I actually managed to find this piece of concept art in the earliest archived version of the entry. I added the information you wanted to the caption. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 13:23, October 14, 2015 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Since you mention that Trebor is a Vurk in the intro can you include it in the body as well? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:42, October 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • The last sentence of the second paragraph in the body seems a bit messy. Could you reword it or split the sentence? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:42, October 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • In the BTS can you include the legends source that originally named the character? I'm assuming it was the Episode I visual guide. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:42, October 23, 2015 (UTC)
    • His name is actually given in the credits of TPM. I've added this information to the Bts section. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:30, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
Cav
  • Although they believed him to be the Chosen One - who is they exactly? The entire council, or just Jinn? I thought the Council had their doubts.
  • Wouldn't the first line of the PT be more at home in the PA section, merging it with the existing sentence there to create a small paragraph rather than a single line section? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 17:25, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:08, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
      • I moved the entire first line of the PT to the PA section and moved it around a little since it seems to flow better there. Tell me what you think. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 22:07, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
        • I did a little adjusting, but I like it. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:33, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:50, June 23, 2016 (UTC)